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Created: 11/16 2008
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Category: Fear

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Astral Conclusion

I am endlessly amazed at the human race

And yet unfortunately it often is not for what is should be

As a whole humankind is tantamount to an enormous social experiment

An experiment that all to often shows their darker sides

 

 

Like a stalker of knowledge I stand in the aft section

I listen. I watch and observe. I learn

I take a gander at the actions of individuals

I like to see what they try to do with their lives

 

 

Some believe in a “Darwinian” path of evolution

Some others believe it the work of unseen divine hands

Which ever it is Homo Sapiens have become the dominant animal

Equipped with a complex brain, creativity, logic and the ability to rationalize

 

 

I know this, as do they all

Yet often when given a choice between a path of logical peace

The ladder of mindless malevolence is opted for

As if viewing another’s perspective is too difficult to conceptualize

 

 

From my line of sight I often witness the squabbles of men

Without emotion I listen. I observe.

I see the points of validation each party makes

I sift through the bitterness and see what is truly on their minds

 

 

From the safety of my vantage point I proceed to politely interject

I converse simultaneously with all disgruntled parties

Without emotion I speak. I demonstrate

With the logic I show them what’s actually wrong and right with a patient stride

 

 

The facts are displayed before them

All they need do is stand back several paces

Remove the crust that’s narrowing their vision of objectivity

It is at that point they would see was previously cloaked in their pride

 

 

Often is the case though that they feel their sight is the correct one

That those who see things from an alternative perspective are wrong

Even when I’ve attempted to show them the facts they would not heed

They’re prone to making judgment calls without sufficient time to properly decide

 

 

It is agreed that this not the case for them all

However these occurrences proceed far too often to be ignored

After several millennia they still fight wars based on looks and beliefs

And routinely extinguish the life flames of the few who ask their brethren to be kind

 

 

I admit that they’ve come a long way. Regrettably they’ve a long way to go still

Because of this, I recommend that we continue to keep Earth’s people oblivious to our existence.

Perhaps after several hundred of their solar revolutions we’ll return and find them at peace

But I must insist that until they can fix their internal issues we should not interfere in their lives

 

 

 

Douglas S. Williams

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On November 21st 2008 caughtbysonnet Said: 
caughtbysonnet 0_0 wow, I take my hat of to you! *votes* xx
On November 19th 2008 muse4apoem Said: 
muse4apoem Quiet the scientist aren't you? Well done my friend. :)
On November 18th 2008 lisaljb Said: 
lisaljb If I was an alien, I would find earth fascinating but with many flaws. Well done Doug. :]
On November 17th 2008 palmtrees16 Said: 
palmtrees16 hmmmmm interesting is the only word i can think of to say..interesting in a good way..of course
On November 17th 2008 halfemoon Said: 
halfemoon Wow. It's so...deep. =D
On November 17th 2008 barbarian1 Said: 
barbarian1 this is wonderfuly writen and verry apt
On November 17th 2008 browneyes33 Said: 
browneyes33 Collin is always the editor.. lol! Doug, me thinks a lot of people ignored the ending. :)
On November 16th 2008 Kdanae88 Said: 
Kdanae88 This is really good Doug.. great observations!!
On November 16th 2008 101091 Said: 
101091 I like it. Very well said. They way you use your words always impresses me.
On November 16th 2008 CollinRebuke Said: 
CollinRebuke There are a few errors, such as the last line of the first stanza where 'to' should be 'too', but all in all I liked it. I didn't expect the end, that was pleasant.
On November 16th 2008 XXFictitiousXX Said: 
XXFictitiousXX luv it when ya get philo :P... is very role play at current, but thats set for change... liked the reference to thinkers as stalkers almost... as for being able to see both sides so attentivly it can be quite maddening at times... unfortunatly often nice guyz finish last
On November 16th 2008 XXFictitiousXX Said: 
XXFictitiousXX Is one loss the same or more worse than another? Human beings aren't really such complex individuals.... although our emotions are diverse they do eventually reach a limit. Just because we don't experience a particular emotion in one instance doesn't mean we haven't experienced that same one in another. In that sense it is capable for people to understand what someone is going through even though they mightn't have gone through exactly the same circumstance....
On November 16th 2008 morbidangel585 Said: 
morbidangel585 very true. and i think people will always continue to fight, whether right or wrong just to make themselves feel better internally. so sadly i think you'd be watching for a while. some issues just cant be fixed. but this was lovely
On November 16th 2008 FireAngel420 Said: 
FireAngel420 Incredible I don't think anyone could have said it any better
On November 16th 2008 Calypso32 Said: 
Calypso32 Opinions are strictly that, opinions. but when we try to make others see our way we often end up viewing them as rules instead of hypotheses. This is a great analytical piece, eye opening. Great work!!~L
On November 16th 2008 Lovelyeyes0 Said: 
Lovelyeyes0 GORGEOUS THUGGY. Absolutely astounding my friend, you capture human drive, intelligence, ability, outlook and issues all very well. But we are not all as such. There are those among us who seek to fix that which in us is broken.
On November 16th 2008 MerK10 Said: 
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truly amazing. i haven't read anything that good in awhile.
On November 16th 2008 max5892 Said: 
max5892 deep. very deep. great job :D
On November 16th 2008 browneyes33 Said: 
browneyes33 I can appreciate your judiciousness. Very wise Doug!
On November 16th 2008 gonzo4201 Said: 
gonzo4201 I can definitely agree with this... Everbody has a different opinion and everone's opinion is correct... Or so they think... They must evolve if they are to survive as the superior species...