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A dedication. She knows who she is.

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Created: 11/17 2008
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Category: Passion

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The Treasrue Within One Who Is Treasured

 

 

20 years

20 long years it has been

Since I’ve heard a melody

That could pierce my calcified heart

Yours is a melody of power

You sung and you felt your words

You gave them everlasting life

Those living notes driven into me hard

I could easily make a comparison to the sirens of Grecian lore

Except the gravity of your voice is one I’ll gladly succumb to

For there are no malicious undertones in your song

That was apparent from the start

You sung almost as if premeditated

As if you somehow procured a copy of my internal schematics

Manipulating your sounds to seduce my ears

A gift you have welded into a form of art

I know not what inspired you to open yourself so

I know not why you decided to share your beauty with me

But like Anita Baker, i am caught up in your rapture

A privilege i am certain i deserve not

I must thank you in earnest M’lady because before your most generous gift

I had within me enough sorrow to leave even peter pan grounded

I have since been attacked with your vocalized serenity

So for you i've digitally scribed these words with all that i've got

 

 

Without intent you aided me in finding that lining of silver i've been looking for

The song of you is unlike any i've ever heard. May it be sung beautifully forever more

 

 

Lastly

I must reiterate

thank you

 

 

 

 

Douglas S. Williams

 


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On November 26th 2008 okinawangirl44 Said: 
okinawangirl44 Beautiful, Doug, absolutely beautiful.
On November 19th 2008 muse4apoem Said: 
muse4apoem Treasure is spelled wrong. But I'm sure you noticed. :) Gosh that's a beautiful poem! Love it ~Kudos~
On November 18th 2008 101091 Said: 
101091 Wow.. *tears* That was absolutely beautiful.
On November 18th 2008 lisaljb Said: 
lisaljb Handsome poem like you. :]
On November 18th 2008 XXFictitiousXX Said: 
XXFictitiousXX admitedly not a fan... perhaps due to the poor qualitly witnessed... or maybe its just a taste aquired... very easy to get dull and dreary with but no ya kept my attention... luved the reference to peter pan... sneakly crafted :P NICE
On November 17th 2008 browneyes33 Said: 
browneyes33 Magnificent. Someone had am emotional impact on you, I see.
On November 17th 2008 erickagere Said: 
erickagere I love it. Mwuah
On November 17th 2008 barbarian1 Said: 
barbarian1 like i said before, you style is nothing like what i normaly look for and it dosen't strike a cord in my soul like some things, but the way you write is so beautiful that i love it anyway. like a blind man hearing someone discribe a sunset, while it means nothing to him personally, he can hear the wonder of the speaker and know the beauty anyway. wonderful poem
On November 17th 2008 FireAngel420 Said: 
FireAngel420 wow another great read I love it, it is beautiful
On November 17th 2008 Calypso32 Said: 
Calypso32 now this is touching! what a heartfelt voice to have inspired you like this! Magnific!~L