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Created: 11/22 2008
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Category: Anger

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Improper Ventilation

Rage manifesting itself

The animal wants to be free

The restraints struggle form the excess torque

The rage must be held at bay

If granted freedom, it would not run for jade pastures

This animal yearns for its freedom

To mangle and ravage and immerse all in chaos

In ruins he'd have all lay

Topsoil saturated with its salivations

Tasting the air in anxious anticipation

Awaiting to taste the pain

Awaiting to release its pain

The rage gives it power

Rage gives it freedom

The rage knows not who's enemy or neutral

The rage sees all as prey

 

 

The rage has broken free

 

 

 

Douglas S. Williams

 

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On April 19th 2009 Kymburleighx3 Said: 
Kymburleighx3 for a second I thought you were going to flip it around, and talk about cars. Yet at the same time I kept trying to think exactly why pain you wanted to release. Or more specifically maybe, who inspired this. I don't know every side do you, and I'm not nearly as complex. But I'd love to just shit down, shut up, and listen. Yet do you speakk?
On December 2nd 2008 ljay33 Said: 
ljay33 Awesome!
On November 23rd 2008 muse4apoem Said: 
muse4apoem Great job I love it.
On November 23rd 2008 kissofasia Said: 
my picture
nice as always
On November 23rd 2008 justjetjustis Said: 
justjetjustis nice :)
On November 22nd 2008 Calypso32 Said: 
Calypso32 Raw....fierce...animalistic. Reminds me of your earlier pieces, s'good to see a return if only in passing to those times.~L
On November 22nd 2008 101091 Said: 
101091 Wow, absolutely wow. I can relate to this feeling all to well.
On November 22nd 2008 gonzo4201 Said: 
gonzo4201 Sometimes, I find myself peering out the windows in my mind, Because I feel you looking in... Fuckin quit it man, this is so me right now,you do not even understand...