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Labor's Fruit
Effort. I do love the word effort This word, or better this action That filters active doers from those who meaninglessly bark on Select individuals employed this word Maybe the effort level was mountainous Maybe the level was miniscule Whatever the level, “Effort” is the critical element inspiring me to harp on Effort Something I am trying to put forward now and cannot Thank you and dedication poems I am no stranger to And for all the clever ways I manipulate my vernacular The creation I aspire to create here eludes me I want to tell you that although you could not get the items you needed Or that what you had to work with was sub par You made effort. Real effort and I loved it I want to tell you that although I know next to nothing about you You took time, which is a luxury you have not in surplus And participated without bias and I loved it I want to tell you babay although our association is young and growing Your unique effort was time consuming and required heavy patience Your method was an unexpected delight and yes I loved it I want to tell you that although it appears at first you took the lazy approach What lies beneath is the double meaning of what you did and I did catch on Your effort made laugh louder than should be legal and how can one not love it? I want to tell you that although you have oceans of circumstances flooding your life You took time and effort and sought to have fun with your contribution You know you don’t have to ask for you know I love it I want to tell you that I see what’s inside you I also see that brain of creativity going and I knew there would be something out of the box from you You made an effort that was high in the cuteness factor and I loved it I want to tell you that although you have a new child and new all day tasks I see you created from scratch based on an inside joke of ours. It was as unexpected as your voice was and like your voice I truly loved it. I’ve wanted to tell you lots of things. To slow down. Smell the proverbial roses The contribution from you I readily admit I placed in the low possibility tray Yet you did and it was sweet and without a doubt it was loved I want to tell you that although you retracted your contribution I did view it and thought I was going to have a seizure from the rich colors It was trippy and I loved it I want to tell you my diminutive friend I know this was difficult Trying to ascertain what creative way you could submit Your style was quiet and subtle naturally loved I want to tell you that I was surprised Submission done by hand was not considered on my end Yet it was done and done well and I loved it Even when you were sick from taking care of your family You got their sickness and although you did You stepped up and your effort was direct and to the point and I loved it You told me that you were getting your wax and lipstick and whatnot When you did I did not imagine I would receive what I did It did have your creative panache and it was greatly loved A new fiend is who you are and long-term friend is who you’ll be Grilled by your elders to pursue and perfect athletic goals You took time form your regimen for me and it was greatly loved A master of double meanings I see. Your effort was unique as well rather cute I loved that you chose to partake in it I want to tell you although you were technically late You did join in the event and you used your signature style You’re like a brother to me and I loved your submission. And your beer! I want to tell you co-host that like most things about you I did not comprehend the reasoning behind the efforts you made on your piece But an effort is an effort I suppose and I loved your submission here. This is not the poem I wanted to create I wanted to do more. To be elaborated and tell each of you something special From the heard and full of emotion I have not been able to create as of late The well springs of my mind Have hit a seemingly impassible dry spell. And I can’t adequately show my appreciation for all of your devotions. I feel like I let you all down and though I have said a hell of a lot here it Is no where near what you all deserve. And for my shortcomings I am truly sorry I don’t even know how to end this but will say this I love all of the effort that was put into this Furthermore I love you all Please pardon this lackluster display of gratitude For you all deserve far more than this Douglas S. Williams
Note: When I came up with the idea for the contest I was going to have all who submiited their art as a mutual winner. The contest was more about who would make the effort as to who was the best. That is why I said in the contest rules that the piece could be as creative or as plain as the person wanted.. More people contributed than I originally thought would. As the poem states I am in a bit of a writers block so i am sorry for the poor quality of this.
I did write for everyone who submitted. It was writen in the order the work was posted.
| On June 27th 2009 ThruOnesEyes Said: |
| On January 11th 2009 ShinseiOnnen Said: |
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| This is beautiful, Doug... Absolutely beautifully written. You continue to astound, amaze, and inspire, just like always. |
| On January 6th 2009 gonzo4201 Said: |
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| Great poem BTW, definitely an honor to be mentioned... |
| On January 6th 2009 gonzo4201 Said: |
| On December 30th 2008 SAXBLONDE Said: |
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| aw =)! |
| On December 30th 2008 lisaljb Said: |
| On December 30th 2008 deadpoet Said: |
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| Seriously now Dougie, you should just tell people where they are lol.
The poem was great though, the middle part was the best. |
| On December 30th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: |
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| ok lets say in the contes ur submission was 5th in order of being posted. then in this poem you would be the 5th person mentioned |
| On December 30th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said: |
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| i ams confused if each is for a different person. . . which one is mines??? *cries in confusion* |
| On December 30th 2008 ausjo Said: |
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| Haha. Effort! I like it. P.S. What contest? Did I miss summat? DOH! |


