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My second Completed song.Rate this Poem
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My Poems
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26
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Ode To A Father |
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34
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Effect and Cause |
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24
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Love my meat |
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23
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In My Hands |
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22
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Following Suit |
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55
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Imbalanced Love |
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67
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Tasting You! |
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27
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The Big Plan |
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19
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It's Yours |
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33
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Justified Karma |
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25
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When |
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30
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Tears of a Crocodile |
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14
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The Day Of Days |
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49
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When (Thinker's Version) |
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21
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No Colonization for me (For Adults) |
Recollection
note: Wanted to do 3 verses but decided I said all I wanted to already.
Verse 1 Remember the pride you said you felt when you made me smile? And how you knew the little things mean so damn much to me? Within my core of cores soaring like I’m on Cumulus Nine You liked making silly me a pri-or, I-ty It was without a doubt you said you knew the place where I belonged? …..The implications stated that it was by your side You said love’s impact would affect you, your whole life long Like Aesop your fables are far from bona-fide Don’t give me anymore of that fictitious lore You shouldn’t use such ploys, that’s what I would implore But you wont see me supplicate you’ve, orchestrated your fate So I have to secede. Hoped you were all that I’d need Chorus You’re not my one! Won’t let you be the one The words you stitched, stitched together well Had me belie,ving all of the words you sewed You’re not my one! Won’t let you be the one The words you stitched, stitched together well Had me belie,ving all of the words you sewed Verse 2 Remember the life you said we’d provide our infant jewels? Giving the courage-hope-wisdom and faith that I gave you? These are your words stated here no-no-no-no twisted facts Distort the truth who me? This negro ain’t havin’ that! Remember my name would be the last you’d utter from your lips? Remember saying I’d be there for your breaths final wisps? Surpassing thin and thick, a happy strong and free pair Does the recollection sting? Well tell someone who’ll care Hexed I am no more by your fictitious lore You shouldn’t use such ploys, but I shall not implore You’ve orchestrated your fate and, karma’s wet it’s pa, lette plate So I have to secede. Turnabout ‘s not my creed Chorus So you’re not my one Guaranteed you’ll never be the one The words you stitched, stitched together well Had me belie,ving all of the words you sewed So you’re not my one Guaranteed you’ll never be the one The words you stitched, stitched together well So ends the tale of you and I with this final knell Douglas S. Williams
Please Login to post comments| On June 3rd 2009 ViableFate Said: |
| This is very passionate. There are words that hit home for me in here especially pride. |
| On May 8th 2009 angeesseule Said: |
| i love the chorus too, amazing job, write some more songs, you are a awesome song writer with sum real talent. |
| On April 26th 2009 elvira2196 Said: |
| Nice job! |
| On April 21st 2009 cuzofa2yearold Said: |
| i dont no u but that was really good! |
| On April 20th 2009 RonHouse Said: |
| This sounds like an amazing song excellent work Doug |
| On April 17th 2009 toroc Said: |
| i love the lines...
"hexed i am no more by your fictitios lore"
i wrote a poem about fictitious! http://www.testriffic.com/poem/toroc/170459 |
| On April 15th 2009 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said: |
| Wow, it's really beautiful. :) |
| On April 14th 2009 AlexINTJ Said: |
| This is excellent. I love the reference to Aesop, and the way you worded everything left it seamless. |
| On April 13th 2009 godsbluejay Said: |
| niceness sir |
| On April 13th 2009 FireAngel420 Said: |
| that was incredible I loved it... but then again I haven't read anything of yours that wasn't incredible |
| On April 13th 2009 mellymellyyay Said: |
| This makes me wanna cut a bish
haha, very lovely doug, such a great work =) |
| On April 13th 2009 lisaljb Said: |
| I agree with Mumma. Man I wish I write like that. :P *copies all your poems* *publish them into teenink.* ;) |
| On April 13th 2009 ArtemisStar Said: |
| Nice work Dougie. x |
| On April 13th 2009 xHickChick789x Said: |
| very nice nastay |
| On April 13th 2009 stitchchick92 Said: |
| "The words you stitched, stitched together well" omg you mentioned me Doug :] lol |
| On April 13th 2009 HiSony Said: |
| wow doug! beautifully written! even though i had to ask you what half of it meant ahah! love this!! :) |
| On April 13th 2009 Sunloverz Said: |
| Oh , maybe that can be misunderstood ... But it was great ! |
| On April 13th 2009 Sunloverz Said: |
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| Wow , ridicolously good |
| On April 13th 2009 morbidangel585 Said: |
| thats is awesome. every verse was very strong and it flowed well and goes great wit the music. and the chorus is amazing. |
| On April 13th 2009 Thugnastay227 Said: |
| Until I can write music on my own I can only find inspiration from beats already made. The music and melody was inspired by this song here. You may be able to follow the song better but listening.  
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