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Created:
04/28 2009
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251
Category:
Fear
My Poems
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When |
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Innocent Fallacies
She would die for him? Does he mean that much to her? He knows she would not So why would she say such words? Inconsistencies Should he choose to believe her? Feelings of Inadequacy He helped her fight through the hurt Her heart misconstrued In love she is with his methods of soothing her. His clairvoyant heart Knows the beating truth within hers He knows and informs her A rebuttal comes not from her Searing facts she's now faced Difficult for anyone to refute such truths She loves the magic of his words. Not the man. Douglas S. Williams
Please Login to post comments| On June 13th 2009 Butterfliesxo Said: |
| heart felt emotion...
Txo |
| On May 24th 2009 Amdusias Said: |
| Your writing style is amazing. but I've already said that countless times,and you already knew it. anyway,great work :) |
| On May 8th 2009 angeesseule Said: |
| I read this one before i just haven't commented, i think this one speaks alot of indepth honesty, i love it, your choice of words are always right on the spot* lol i had to revised that comment it was freked up, i'm at work so i was rush writing lol |
| On May 8th 2009 angeesseule Said: |
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| Iread this before i just haven't commented, i think this one speaks alot of indepth honest, i love it, you're choice of words are allways right on the dot. |
| On May 4th 2009 servantofall36 Said: |
| This is very poignant ... such brutal intuition. 'She loves the magic of his words'. I love that line. Words really can be magic. |
| On April 30th 2009 deadpoet Said: |
| Poor guy.
Great poem, as usual. |
| On April 29th 2009 okinawangirl44 Said: |
| very nice job |
| On April 28th 2009 BonnieBeatles Said: |
| Fantastic job. |
| On April 28th 2009 lisaljb Said: |
| Not intended? Huh? |
| On April 28th 2009 SoulJustice Said: |
| his could make a pretty good solilique! or how ever you spell that word! |
| On April 28th 2009 ThruOnesEyes Said: |
| FAAAALIIICIIIEEESSS! |
| On April 28th 2009 FireAngel420 Said: |
| that was beautiful...although I don't think you could write a bad poem you are far to tallented (you suck lol) |
| On April 28th 2009 mda08 Said: |
| luv it |
| On April 28th 2009 HiSony Said: |
| love this! :) would hate to be in the girls shoes though :DD |
