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Sleeping Truth
So I had a dream about you last night
As is typical with my R.E.M.'s, it occured in lucid format
I saw you ba...... hmmmmm.
I was oh so tempted to refer to you as my baby
Long lived habits are always the most difficult to kill
Regardless of all the efforts
So yes ummm the dream was about you last night
As is typical I stood in awe of your natural beauty
I stayed close to reacquaint myself with your scent
Two separate vessels held close as if attempting to fuse
Perfect is the flesh of u as if never having made the acquaintance of time's will
Though it was but a moment, well aware was I of my situation
That is was nothing more than a facsimile spawned from the emotional depths
my subconscious' version of a coup d'etat
Successfully it overthrew my prior belief of something I thought long dead
For it is your heart that mine yearns to rage for when those feelings should be nil
I know I don't love you anymore
Yet it is for that empty hope I find my self still grasping
Why is it this Aquarian having trouble detaching?
Douglas S. Williams
| On October 2nd 2009 megaeden Said: |
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| all your poems just flow, it puts me in awe constantly. wonderful poem |
| On September 8th 2009 Kymburleighx3 Said: |
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| imissourwords.yourwords.mywords. |
| On September 3rd 2009 deadpoet Said: |
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| you and your unique poetry gotta love it! |
| On August 27th 2009 elvira2196 Said: |
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| Very different and I definitely enjoyed it! |
| On August 27th 2009 elvira2196 Said: |
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| Very different and I definitely enjoyed it! |
| On August 17th 2009 Octobear Said: |
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| I really believe that you are a genius. |
| On August 17th 2009 LittlKiraDemon Said: |
| On August 16th 2009 CharTheKnight Said: |
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| The originality is very refreshing. I'd say this one is a four thumbs up. :D |
| On August 16th 2009 JessSwindell Said: |
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| LOVE IT!
so much thought behind the words!
Very well expressed!
Kudos!
Two thumbs up...and a toe!
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| On August 16th 2009 muse4apoem Said: |
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| Very interesting who is this mystery woman? Well you know her lol. It is pretty and I can also picture everything in this poem. :) |
| On August 16th 2009 lisaljb Said: |
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| On August 15th 2009 godsbluejay Said: |
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| struggling, ay? well overall nice and i agree with jake whenever i read something of urs i can hear u reading it out loud in my head hhahaha |
| On August 15th 2009 ADreamersWorld Said: |
| On August 15th 2009 Fairiesrule112 Said: |
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| Its amazing Doug! ^_^ In a weird way, it reminds me of my friend Nick. Hmmm...Oo...but its absolutely amazing. |
| On August 15th 2009 servantofall36 Said: |
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| Lovely, friend. 'my subconsious' version of a coup d'etat'. I love that. It is interesting that you see that in yourself. Most people do not go that deep. Well done. :) |
| On August 15th 2009 chaotickitty12 Said: |
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| I dig it. The raw emotion is quite becoming for you. |
| On August 15th 2009 ThruOnesEyes Said: |
| On August 15th 2009 Kymburleighx3 Said: |
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| detaching..? |
| On August 15th 2009 max5892 Said: |
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| me likey =D |
| On August 15th 2009 XXFictitiousXX Said: |
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| *high fives* |
| On August 15th 2009 toroc Said: |
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| wow this is really good |


