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My Poems
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The prison of my heart |
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What to write |
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No life only evil |
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I dont know much about love |
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All i want |
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How to be happy as i know it |
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Quotes from me |
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My soul speaks |
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Go ahead |
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Biking |
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Five senses tell all |
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Treasure what you have |
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Logical death |
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More then i should |
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Im in love |
My soul speaks
Burn strong does my pain of heart
Burning like the sun high in the sky
Dare you not get close or feel my wrath
Look from afar as to what I have become
Great joy fills my heart of love
Joy for all those things taken for granted
Like a man cheating on his girl
When I am here wishing I had someone
Dark is the world I live in alone
Bright be the sun outside
But covered in shadow is my mind
Like an eclipse that I cant wait to rid of
Kiss me kiss me oh wont someone kiss me
Something I do not know though I have seen
Like seeing a trailer for a movie that you will never see
Something I can feel on the air but can not touch
Close my eyes I can see her there
But to see her away is all to much to bare
Lonely are these lips waiting for someone to take my pain away
Strong is my fire that fuels my desire
Though I will fall into my grief
sucked down into a vortex of hell
There is no force strong enough to keep me down
You may strike me with words so harsh
I can say things about me that would make you cringe
But no matter the weight on my shoulders or how low I get
I will always rise like a phoenix from the ashes of his own death
| On June 17th 2007 SoulRevival18 Said: |
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| amazing piece! this is such a fabulous writing.. sad and yet hopeful. good work! |
| On June 8th 2007 usseal Said: |
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| really good, i like it |
| On May 10th 2007 thatbluewoman Said: |
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| i love this |
| On April 28th 2007 sarh92 Said: |
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| This poem was very deep. And you wrote it will. I can tottaly relate to the pain in this. o_O |
| On April 28th 2007 Toaditup Said: |
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| Under my authors comments i do say no comments, i meant something else by that lol I do want people to post comments on it though :) |
| On April 28th 2007 Tony1985 Said: |
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| This is great! A can feel your anger, hurt and pride when I read this. Witout being mean, I do like the unintentional Yoda style you have though.
Great job! |


