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Treasure what you have
What are the real treasures in our life?
A big paycheck
Getting laid by so many women you lose count
But you remember how many times you tell your buddies about it
Kissing your mate then going out and kissing another
What do we treasure?!
The above belongs to the lucky ones
Who don’t realize how valuable they have it
Understand the treasures in your life through my eyes
Remember when you make love to someone
How badly I wish I had someone to just “like” me
Never forget when you go out with friends
Who the man is sitting alone at home talking to himself
Cause there is no one else there to talk to
And by God remember when you kiss someone
How much value is in those one set of lips
Remember that there is someone out there
Who could cry even now for the loneliness in his heart
Treasure what you have and don’t take advantage of it
Cause no one truly understands how good they have it.
No one understands what its like to want someone to hug you
When you are on the brink of tears but having no one but yourself.
Think you can relate to me?! Try having no friends
Try not hating anyone no matter what
Try smiling at those people you could cry for
Try and look through my eyes to see the real treasures you have in your life…
“Oh god wont someone give me a hand…im so tired of bringing myself back up”
| On June 1st 2007 charming8 Said: |
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| it's so heartbreaking...well written. |
| On June 1st 2007 miltarybabe09 Said: |
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| like always i loved it!!! follow your dreams of being a writer because you can make it. im have all the faith in the world in you |
| On June 1st 2007 miltarybabe09 Said: |
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| like always i loved it!!! follow your dreams of being a writer because you can make it. im have all the faith in the world in you |
| On May 31st 2007 blah2blah Said: |
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| wow...a bit depressing but so much emotion and truth in the words. i really enjoyed reading it! |
| On May 31st 2007 tswieberg Said: |
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| I have to agree with chickenbroth.....awesome poem. |
| On May 31st 2007 chickenbroth Said: |
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| Wow, this really touched me. I admire the message in this, and the man that put it out there. Great work! |


