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In my sorrow i can open your eyes

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Created: 05/31 2007
Views: 139
Category: Pain

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Treasure what you have

 

What are the real treasures in our life?

A big paycheck

Getting laid by so many women you lose count

But you remember how many times you tell your buddies about it

Kissing your mate then going out and kissing another

What do we treasure?!

The above belongs to the lucky ones

Who don’t realize how valuable they have it

Understand the treasures in your life through my eyes

Remember when you make love to someone

How badly I wish I had someone to just “like” me

Never forget when you go out with friends

Who the man is sitting alone at home talking to himself

Cause there is no one else there to talk to

And by God remember when you kiss someone

How much value is in those one set of lips

Remember that there is someone out there

Who could cry even now for the loneliness in his heart

Treasure what you have and don’t take advantage of it

Cause no one truly understands how good they have it.

No one understands what its like to want someone to hug you

When you are on the brink of tears but having no one but yourself.

Think you can relate to me?! Try having no friends

Try not hating anyone no matter what

Try smiling at those people you could cry for

Try and look through my eyes to see the real treasures you have in your life…

“Oh god wont someone give me a hand…im so tired of bringing myself back up”

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On June 1st 2007 charming8 Said: 
charming8 it's so heartbreaking...well written.
On June 1st 2007 miltarybabe09 Said: 
miltarybabe09 like always i loved it!!! follow your dreams of being a writer because you can make it. im have all the faith in the world in you
On June 1st 2007 miltarybabe09 Said: 
miltarybabe09 like always i loved it!!! follow your dreams of being a writer because you can make it. im have all the faith in the world in you
On May 31st 2007 blah2blah Said: 
blah2blah wow...a bit depressing but so much emotion and truth in the words. i really enjoyed reading it!
On May 31st 2007 tswieberg Said: 
tswieberg I have to agree with chickenbroth.....awesome poem.
On May 31st 2007 chickenbroth Said: 
chickenbroth Wow, this really touched me. I admire the message in this, and the man that put it out there. Great work!