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A metaphor poem.Rate this Poem
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Created:
11/29 2008
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130
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My Poems
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Say. |
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Just Need Me |
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Tough |
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Stronger Than I Was |
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The Lights On The Water |
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Losing The One Who Mattered Most |
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For You Have My Heart |
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Unaffected |
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Deadly |
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Just Enough |
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Deception |
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My River |
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Your Disappointment |
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Exactly Who They Said You Were |
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My River
My life is a river. Sinuous and smooth. Until you feel the current And I begin to move. Running, dancing, Tripping over stones A single destination But I’m never all alone. I hiss and I spit, But I refresh and I soothe I calm and I upset And I am frequently used. I keep on going Growing older and growing wise My body grows wider And I lengthen in size I deepen, I shallow I whisper, I scream I’m a torrent, a wonder A nightmare, a dream I keep going and going Always wishing to be enough I keep fasting and slowing And I am known to be tough But still I am river Sometimes sinuous and smooth Bothered by no one But people who want the truth
| On May 30th 2009 gonzo4201 Said: |
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| I loved this one as well, very vivid and imaginitive, could definitely feel this one... |
| On April 14th 2009 Benitto420 Said: |
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| Wow, this is a very good poem. I shall have to read more of yours! |
| On November 30th 2008 FireAngel420 Said: |
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| I like this and I can definatly relate to it great job |


