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A metaphor poem.

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Created: 11/29 2008
Views: 130
Category: Respect

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Meaning.

My River

My life is a river.

Sinuous and smooth.

Until you feel the current

And I begin to move.

Running, dancing,

Tripping over stones

A single destination

But I’m never all alone.

I hiss and I spit,

But I refresh and I soothe

I calm and I upset

And I am frequently used.

I keep on going

Growing older and growing wise

My body grows wider

And I lengthen in size

I deepen, I shallow

I whisper, I scream

I’m a torrent, a wonder

A nightmare, a dream

I keep going and going

Always wishing to be enough

I keep fasting and slowing

And I am known to be tough

But still I am river

Sometimes sinuous and smooth

Bothered by no one

But people who want the truth

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On May 30th 2009 gonzo4201 Said: 
gonzo4201 I loved this one as well, very vivid and imaginitive, could definitely feel this one...
On April 14th 2009 Benitto420 Said: 
Benitto420 Wow, this is a very good poem. I shall have to read more of yours!
On November 30th 2008 FireAngel420 Said: 
FireAngel420 I like this and I can definatly relate to it great job