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Created:
12/17 2008
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172
Category:
Lyric
My Poems
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15
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Say. |
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9
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Just Need Me |
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9
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Tough |
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9
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Stronger Than I Was |
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6
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The Lights On The Water |
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7
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Losing The One Who Mattered Most |
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6
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For You Have My Heart |
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6
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Unaffected |
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5
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Deadly |
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5
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Just Enough |
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6
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Deception |
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6
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My River |
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9
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Your Disappointment |
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Exactly Who They Said You Were |
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Meaning. |
Meaning.
Blinded by ambition,
strengthened by the cause.
Stuck in this condition,
abiding by the laws.
I live for you, I see for you,
I breathe for you in this endless array of colors.
Because in your eyes I see something
that overcomes the others.
What's the difference between hatred?
The meaning or the name?
The broken-suffocated or
the twisted head-heart game?
Allow yourself to swallow
because that's all you'll have left.
Just you inside your moments
taking a breath after breath.
Please Login to post comments| On June 3rd 2009 Thugnastay227 Said: |
| interesting. it seems the first half has a different frame of mind than the first half. almost as if it could be 2 separate poems. there is a commonality im sure but i may have too much alcohol to tell. either way it makes me stop and think and i like that. impressive |
| On April 14th 2009 Benitto420 Said: |
| Wow, I'm very impressed! Very good job |
| On March 15th 2009 browneyes33 Said: |
| Awesomeness! |
| On March 10th 2009 JWalker2406 Said: |
| Another amazing poem. Again how you arrange your poem just makes it flow and is great to read! gj! |
| On December 20th 2008 transgenic Said: |
| I love this. "Allow yourself to swallow because that's all you have left." Amazing! |
| On December 18th 2008 DharmaDS Said: |
| very nice poem :) |
