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Created: 02/25 2008
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Category: Tragedy

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Drunk Driver

Drunk Driver

He looks at me

and I stare back

into his eyes,

they're coals of black

 

his eyes were once

so full of light

before that sad

and fateful night

 

they shown with vigor

they could brighten you day

till one drunk driver

took that away

 

he saw the whole thing

helpless as could be

he stood their scared

by the old apple tree

 

the driver got drunk

at his party that night

the left feely merry

said they were all right

 

so him, having fun

let the drive leave

i know now he wishes

that he just hadnt believed

 

he feels its his fault

and i fell bad for him true,

but my poem is my warning

don;t let it happen to you

 

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On July 11th 2008 momsrule Said: 
momsrule i like how it makes you see the senario in your mind and it also sends a great message (: i love it!
On March 5th 2008 AlBobby Said: 
AlBobby ... goodness, whoa.
On February 28th 2008 HumanF17TH Said: 
HumanF17TH this is really good!
On February 27th 2008 betyoucantgess Said: 
betyoucantgess aww im sad now thats awesome!! your poem not my sadness if this is true, sorry for your loss
On February 27th 2008 funchelsea Said: 
funchelsea this is a very nice poem and i really like it, its really sad, and true in a lot of cases.
On February 27th 2008 dorkwitfork Said: 
dorkwitfork ooh i really like this one... dya mind if i use it in my acting class?
On February 26th 2008 beautyisthewol Said: 
beautyisthewol it's very good, you just need to fix the grammer errors.
On February 26th 2008 twilight8218 Said: 
twilight8218 i like it
On February 26th 2008 brokenwings122 Said: 
brokenwings122 Well, the base for your poem is good, but you had a few spelling/grammar mistakes that took away from the flow. Fix that and it'll be great.
On February 26th 2008 mydragonlord Said: 
mydragonlord so true! very well captured!
On February 26th 2008 LadyCha0s Said: 
LadyCha0s aww
On February 25th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said: 
EvilRaven9892 oh wow I saw everything happen
On February 25th 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said: 
tyiqoqibfiobao very good
On February 25th 2008 xPunkxVanityx Said: 
xPunkxVanityx 0.o This is really good!