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hate me always.

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Created: 04/30 2008
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Category: Pain

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Surrender

Pain is raging
from you and me
and I think that if I
point the dagger
to my own chest
it will get better,
but it doesn't
my world is ripping apart
I hold it with trembling hands
because I know
that if it truly wants this
then my hands will let the pieces go.
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On May 30th 2008 JWalker2406 Said: 
JWalker2406 I like it. :D I like the last line :D
On May 28th 2008 flutytute Said: 
flutytute *wipes tear away* speechless... I think it's amazing!
On May 28th 2008 moosegurl01 Said: 
moosegurl01 ran outta good stuff to say i've used good poem..great poem...nice...cool...lol