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hate me always.Rate this Poem
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Created:
04/30 2008
Views:
196
Category:
Pain
My Poems
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18
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Waiting |
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8
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Someday |
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10
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Bleeding Hearts |
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11
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Looks That Kill |
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7
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Worthless |
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7
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Just Do It. |
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5
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My Own Fool |
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11
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*Rage* |
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7
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Surrender |
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8
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Oh the Romance |
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7
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Until |
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8
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When I Forget |
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8
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Fingertips |
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10
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Masque |
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10
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Bitter Taste |
Surrender
Pain is raging
from you and me
and I think that if I
point the dagger
to my own chest
it will get better,
but it doesn't
my world is ripping apart
I hold it with trembling hands
because I know
that if it truly wants this
then my hands will let the pieces go.
from you and me
and I think that if I
point the dagger
to my own chest
it will get better,
but it doesn't
my world is ripping apart
I hold it with trembling hands
because I know
that if it truly wants this
then my hands will let the pieces go.
| On May 30th 2008 JWalker2406 Said: |
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| I like it. :D I like the last line :D |
| On May 28th 2008 flutytute Said: |
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| *wipes tear away* speechless... I think it's amazing! |
| On May 28th 2008 moosegurl01 Said: |
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| ran outta good stuff to say i've used good poem..great poem...nice...cool...lol |


