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there's no light here, no spark

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Created: 07/12 2008
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Category: Pain

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Fire

this fire won't start, the match is a dud
you've dragged everything i am through the mud
now my fingers are shaking, too weak
i close my eyes, too scared to peek
what i need now is a little friction
but all i have before me is this suspicion
there's no light here, no spark
no ignition, i'm left in the dark
even if i wanted to, it's over, i can't do this
there will be no fire, no warmth, only something for me to miss.

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On July 30th 2009 Laishahriver Said: 
Laishahriver very very good nice job :)
On July 14th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said: 
xXPunkGirl09Xx Wow, it is too deep but i love it. Very well written
On July 13th 2008 rosebrugh Said: 
rosebrugh the first two sentences didnt flow very well.but oh well,right
On July 13th 2008 chayeah22 Said: 
chayeah22 I like the flow...very nice.
On July 12th 2008 barbarian1 Said: 
barbarian1 nice poem
On July 12th 2008 Calypso32 Said: 
Calypso32 Very nice, this metaphor communicates much more than just a match that won't light, but in essence, the dismal effects of rejection. Niceness.~L
On July 12th 2008 shorteternity Said: 
shorteternity Great poem, I like how the metaphor is spread throughout.
On July 12th 2008 FireAngel420 Said: 
FireAngel420 that was incredible I love it great job
On July 12th 2008 tiffany1058 Said: 
tiffany1058 wow amazing work
On July 12th 2008 xsafetypinx Said: 
xsafetypinx wow. this was amazing. i loved it x].
On July 12th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said: 
Andy2Anomaly This is great I really like your poetry.