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there's no light here, no sparkRate this Poem
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Created:
07/12 2008
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281
Category:
Pain
My Poems
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Fire
this fire won't start, the match is a dud
you've dragged everything i am through the mud
now my fingers are shaking, too weak
i close my eyes, too scared to peek
what i need now is a little friction
but all i have before me is this suspicion
there's no light here, no spark
no ignition, i'm left in the dark
even if i wanted to, it's over, i can't do this
there will be no fire, no warmth, only something for me to miss.
| On July 30th 2009 Laishahriver Said: |
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| very very good nice job :) |
| On July 14th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said: |
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| Wow, it is too deep but i love it. Very well written |
| On July 13th 2008 rosebrugh Said: |
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| the first two sentences didnt flow very well.but oh well,right |
| On July 13th 2008 chayeah22 Said: |
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| I like the flow...very nice. |
| On July 12th 2008 barbarian1 Said: |
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| nice poem |
| On July 12th 2008 Calypso32 Said: |
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| Very nice, this metaphor communicates much more than just a match that won't light, but in essence, the dismal effects of rejection. Niceness.~L
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| On July 12th 2008 shorteternity Said: |
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| Great poem, I like how the metaphor is spread throughout. |
| On July 12th 2008 FireAngel420 Said: |
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| that was incredible I love it great job |
| On July 12th 2008 tiffany1058 Said: |
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| wow amazing work |
| On July 12th 2008 xsafetypinx Said: |
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| wow. this was amazing. i loved it x]. |
| On July 12th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said: |
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| This is great I really like your poetry. |


