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I want more than fairytales at bedtime.Rate this Poem
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My Poems
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Waiting |
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Someday |
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10
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Bleeding Hearts |
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11
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Looks That Kill |
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7
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Worthless |
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Just Do It. |
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5
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My Own Fool |
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11
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*Rage* |
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Surrender |
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Oh the Romance |
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7
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Until |
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When I Forget |
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Fingertips |
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Masque |
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Bitter Taste |
The Clock Strikes Twelve
Though this is sure to be a total disaster
I still want to get your heart beating faster.
I want you to see me, into me
my Romeo is what I want you to be,
I want to know how a heart gloats
to pass tiny private notes
and forget the world to see your face.
I want to be next to you, in her place,
but her short little skirt and inviting smile
are leaving me in the dust all the while.
I imagine the feel of my hand on your cheek
such thoughts leave me weak.
Do you know my heart could be yours so easily?
And it would no longer be inside of me.
If sweet words would only fall from your mouth
my heart would be heading south
falling into you, everything you are.
For my night you are the star
flaring too brightly to be missed
devastating by leaving lips unkissed.
In and out, my thoughts weave
leaving my heart on the end of my sleeve.
There it will stay, I can't have it back
now that it's yours, because I've lost track,
forgetting how I was before
now all I want is more.
More than fairytales at bedtime
that end so sweetly in rhyme
a princess woken by our hero's kiss
catching her heart, too close to miss.
But this is no storybook,
love is not given in a look,
I know you will not answer my call
and let me fall,
because you are not the one for me
so I close these pages and let it be.
| On July 25th 2008 JWalker2406 Said: |
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| Awww...This was really good! |
| On July 16th 2008 tiffany1058 Said: |
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| another great one it was wonderful!!!! |
| On July 14th 2008 xHickChick789x Said: |
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| aww it's so pretty |
| On July 14th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said: |
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| WOW, it is beautiful but unexpected ending. I love it. |
| On July 13th 2008 mOnessaLUVSu Said: |
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| its really good..! i really liked it. keep writing! |
| On July 13th 2008 shorteternity Said: |
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| love it...esp. the unexpected ending. |
| On July 13th 2008 xXkenzieXz Said: |
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| wow great peom....this is really awesome! It's different than most of the sappy love peoms. i like it alot! |
| On July 13th 2008 Calypso32 Said: |
| On July 13th 2008 helen1789 Said: |
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| very good,i like the images it creates in mymind :D |
| On July 13th 2008 barbarian1 Said: |
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| its a great poem, i like it a lot |
| On July 13th 2008 chayeah22 Said: |
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| I like it...It's very jaded but nice. |
| On July 13th 2008 Violetlily Said: |
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| tear. you arethe best poet i know. i loved it! ^-^ |
| On July 13th 2008 menomosso11 Said: |
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| that was good, talented |
| On July 13th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said: |
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| This was really good. |
| On July 13th 2008 101091 Said: |
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| I really like it. Well done. |
| On July 13th 2008 xsafetypinx Said: |
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| yay. it's incredible as usual. x]. |
| On July 13th 2008 XxCloudyEyesxX Said: |
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| ehh, not my best, but tell me what you think!! |


