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my ears were made to hear your voiceRate this Poem
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Created:
07/16 2008
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252
Category:
Love
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In My Dreams
your fingerprints are branded on my heart
they have been from the start
when I first began to form
before I was even born
I could swear that I knew you even then
that the act of not knowing was the truest sin
my ears were made to hear your voice
even in my dreams, they have no choice
my smile is meant to return yours
and I live for it when my spirit soars
only to have you near
is all I need, it couldn't be more clear
and if I can drown in your eyes
then I can forget each day's lies
I will die happy if you would say
only say that you would stay
Please Login to post comments| On July 19th 2008 xsafetypinx Said: |
| awwwwwwe. this is really really pretty. beautiful. x]. |
| On July 16th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said: |
| This is really good. :D |
| On July 16th 2008 jabip15 Said: |
| omg i love this!!! |
| On July 16th 2008 101091 Said: |
| Very well said. I really like it. |
| On July 16th 2008 Calypso32 Said: |
| At first I thought this was referring to God, then at the end I wondered if I was a bit mistaken, haha, you write in a way that flows from one feeling to another, almost effortlessly. Nice job, once again.~L |
| On July 16th 2008 LostSoul1121 Said: |
| Awww that's so sweet! I love it!! |
| On July 16th 2008 helen1789 Said: |
| very good :D i like the way you've made the lines rhyme :D good job!!! |
| On July 16th 2008 shorteternity Said: |
| I wish the same. Good job, I enjoy how the whole poem is in one stanza. Its your trademark. |
| On July 16th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said: |
| I love it :) |
