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How can you stay up while I drown?Rate this Poem
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Created:
08/10 2008
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189
Category:
Anger
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Mama's Boy
Talking to you is talking to a wall
in your eyes she is oh so tall
you cannot see the error
fatal as it is, you've forgotten the terror
so eager to listen as 'sorry' falls down
how can you stay up while I drown?
I'm falling in everything she did
each time she called me kid
every "When are you going to grow up?"
all the times she slapped my mouth shut
every time she yanked on my hair
every single time, you were there
and yet, it's as if it's gone
the moon fading into the dawn.
I cannot bear this any longer
it hasn't killed me or made me stronger
if you will not let her go
then it's time to end this show,
I'm saying goodbye to you
because you're a package deal, she comes too
I am sorry dear brother, for what we were
because it was all torn apart by her.
| On August 16th 2008 Calypso32 Said: |
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| Wow, bitter and fitting, I like this one!! (Nice title as well)~L |
| On August 11th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said: |
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| wow i love it. hey i like the title, "mama's boy." It perfectly fits it. :) |
| On August 11th 2008 xHickChick789x Said: |
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| omg this is outstanding! Keep up the great work hun! :P |
| On August 11th 2008 Violetlily Said: |
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| hey, another stunner, your poems are so bloody great. ^-^ |
| On August 11th 2008 shorteternity Said: |
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| I love the questions in your poems, and nice background. Sent ya a message. 8) (Stormy) |
| On August 10th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said: |
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| THis was great. Just like all of your other work. :D |


