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Created:
09/02 2008
Views:
250
Category:
Pain
My Poems
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18
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Waiting |
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8
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Someday |
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10
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Bleeding Hearts |
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11
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Looks That Kill |
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7
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Worthless |
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7
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Just Do It. |
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5
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My Own Fool |
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11
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*Rage* |
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7
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Surrender |
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8
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Oh the Romance |
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7
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Until |
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8
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When I Forget |
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8
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Fingertips |
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10
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Masque |
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10
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Bitter Taste |
Hit Me
Please,
this fight isn't over.
Please,
bring me to my knees
as the pain inside me breathes
bleeds, and pulls up seeds
of the brief happy time
not given even a year to grow
and I'm back to what I know.
Please,
give the boys a show.
Show them where to take me
to shake and break me
tell them the pain can wake me.
Please,
leave me in the dirt
when you're done
walk with head held high
because you had some fun.
Please,
let me know
just how much you hate me.
Please Login to post comments| On September 13th 2008 shorteternity Said: |
| way to keep at it.
8) |
| On September 6th 2008 Violetlily Said: |
| i like it, i can definatly see what your trying to get across. great job! |
| On September 3rd 2008 Calypso32 Said: |
| Victim speaking here, willingly or unwillingly. I couldn't discern if the voice was a bitter/sad/angry one or a conglomeration of the three. Interesting view tho, great work.~L |
| On September 2nd 2008 xHickChick789x Said: |
| Well, I think it's interesting when you post some things that aren't your style, but this is deep, yet great. Nice job! |
| On September 2nd 2008 XxCloudyEyesxX Said: |
| Definately not my normal style, please tell me what you think.. |
