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I never want to forget these days,Rate this Poem
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Created:
11/14 2008
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161
Category:
Love
My Poems
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Someday |
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Surrender |
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Oh the Romance |
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Until |
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When I Forget |
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Fingertips |
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Masque |
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Bitter Taste |
Never Want to Forget
The hiss of breath through teeth,
even though the sighting was brief
but in the dawn, before the sky is blue
it actually hurts me to look at you.
You'll never be mine, I will never see that day
I take it as a symbol that you walk a different way.
In the crowd you may as well shine
I can't not see you, with these eyes of mine.
It's always worse on days that you try to hide
behind those frames our eyes still collide
and that sea storm blue etches you in my mind
my memory will hold you even if I go blind.
I never want to forget these days, here and now
because I love you, I don't want to forget the ways how.
I can't say this will last forever, I can't look past my dreams
in the world of tomorrow, another possibility streams.
| On December 5th 2008 lisaljb Said: |
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| Well done! |
| On November 20th 2008 LatinaBabi22 Said: |
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| I love it!! |
| On November 16th 2008 menomosso11 Said: |
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| so pretty. Wonderfully written |
| On November 15th 2008 barbarian1 Said: |
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| *wipes away tears* its beautiful
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| On November 14th 2008 Calypso32 Said: |
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| this is good, though I feel your best is elsewhere, this is a good idealistic poem. Good write.~L |
| On November 14th 2008 ThorinPomp Said: |
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| i freakin loved this pretty much |
| On November 14th 2008 toni2006 Said: |
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| i like it really well written |
| On November 14th 2008 sexxycupcake Said: |
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| this makes me think of the guy that i like and i am trying not to cry. thanx.
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