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meh, here's another love one

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Created: 03/18 2009
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Category: Love

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I Adore You

Wretchedly in love with you
what an honestly perfect confession
for me to adhere my heart to
for my mind to curve into possession.

It hurts deep in my chest
I turn the music much higher
until it breaks through the metal mesh
letting my soul catch fire.

I can't let myself think too long
my eyelids paint your face
even contemplating it within the song
too much and I am gone in my disgrace.

I know that I do not want to do this
I don't want to fall here, now
but when I see your face my motives go amiss
it truly is so much more than I should allow.

I don't want to hate what you do to me
but my hands always shake, and I can't breathe
more than anything I really want you to see
see everything that I wish we could be.
One last little thing, won't take long
I can't promise once it's said I'll be through
but so long as I'm trying to make myself belong
I might mention that I absolutely adore you.

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On April 10th 2009 xXkenzieXz Said: 
xXkenzieXz I love this.....its cute!!! your write exceptionally well i and uber jealous!!!
On March 21st 2009 xAlenax Said: 
xAlenax I have a poem too if you want to read it.. its not Great, because it was my first one. but I think I did pretty good.. Idk, thats just from me, but it would be nice if you could give me some advice, and tell me how I did. 8)
On March 21st 2009 xAlenax Said: 
xAlenax Awe! this was cute:)
On March 18th 2009 angeesseule Said: 
angeesseule I'm just pulling your leg.. I |don't| know you. RHYMING IS NOT DEAD. THANK YOU FOR BRINGING IT BACK TO LIFE. PEOPLE ARE TO LAZY TO RHYME IN POETRY THESE DAYS. BECAUSE THEY ARE TOO LAZY TO THINK ABOUT WHAT RHYMES WITH ..ORANGE. KUDOS POET, KUDOS*
On March 18th 2009 angeesseule Said: 
angeesseule LOL I ADORE YOU TOO!
On March 18th 2009 mda08 Said: 
mda08 nice!!..i luvz it!!!
On March 18th 2009 LastWariorPoet Said: 
LastWariorPoet I enjoyed reading this, you captured the frail hope that love would be requited well.