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A letter for my ex. =[ I know sad..Rate this Poem
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Created:
06/16 2007
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586
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Passion
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Final Love Letter. |
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Painting A Face. |
Final Love Letter.
If I died today;
Think of it as a piece of heaven coming to take me away.
Don't shed your tears.
For I, will always be there with you.
You may not see me.
But, I have eyes of many watching carefully over you.
My body may be gone.
But, my spirit still stays to motivates you to keep going.
Live a long an happy life my dear.
For I, once again shall be with you.
Breathe each breath as if it were your last.
My love for you is still strong.
Ride the wings of god.
For, he will bring you back to me once more.
Heaven has a place for you and me.
&&I'll will be waiting for you at the gates of entry.
Please Login to post comments| On June 27th 2007 drowningnlove Said: |
| beautiful |
| On June 20th 2007 ShannyPooWTF Said: |
| i love it. you did an awesome job...gave me shivers. |
| On June 18th 2007 PoeticPang Said: |
| hmmm,, it's nice,,,,, kinda sounds like u ,, uh,, want that other person to die pretty soon,,,,, so u can be rejoined,, ehm,,,,, but it's insanely romantic,,, ^_______^ hmmm,, reminds me of someone,,,, someone(s)?........... i prob know what this whole poem is about,, but i tend to interpret things the wrong way,,,, in my own view,,, when u die,,, u'll start a new chapter,,, doesn't always conclude that you'll be together again,,,,,,,,, and that's oke,,, cause u can still change ur thoughts ...... i find that when u love someone enough to the point where u can let them go,,,, let them be happy in their own ways without u..... that's the best kind of loving.... where u may have memories and regrets,,, but u live and move on,,, what's the point in waiting for ppl to come back to u,,, or waiting for them to join u in death?.... it just makes u selfish to think such things,,, to be bound to another while living or dead... human hearts are constantly changing thoughts........ u should never try to plan something after death....it's always a lost cause (and effect)~~~~~Pang |
| On June 17th 2007 gabbytas Said: |
| VERY MOVING POEM ,LOVELY |
| On June 17th 2007 gigglehottie Said: |
| b-e-a-utiful yet sad... lovely |
| On June 17th 2007 psychoralu Said: |
| very mature and profound |
| On June 17th 2007 SoulRevival18 Said: |
| sad yet... lovely... absolutely lovely. |
| On June 17th 2007 KiddieWishes Said: |
| amazing, just amazing[: |
| On June 16th 2007 gracielou75 Said: |
| beautiful, it's very moving |
| On June 16th 2007 MuteHotline Said: |
| Beautifully sad, but hopeful. Great poem. |
| On June 16th 2007 amptone Said: |
| Beautifully sad is what comes to mind. Seems like you or someone you know has lost a close loved one. I like it and it is very well written. |
