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Reverse Point of View
See that girl, over there?
I used to know her.
She followed the rules and always fought fair.
Never cheated.
Never lied.
To my regret,
she practically died.
Threw out her number,
threw out her friends.
One of many chosen ends:
forgotton, just like every other time.
"No, I won't be your valentine."
It's my fault,
her beating heart's come to a halt.
But why am I suffering,
and she's doin' fine?
She's just the one who left it all behind.
I admire,
she expired.
She plays games,
I go for fame.
Won't talk,
won't stop.
Girl, you play the part too well.
While I'm taking a vacation in hell,
your heart you must sell.
I wish you luck, farewell.
| On November 2nd 2008 audica Said : | |
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this is awesome!! |
| On October 26th 2008 barbarian1 Said : | |
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verry nice poem |
| On October 26th 2008 doll70806 Said : | |
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ccccoool poem |
| On October 26th 2008 doll70806 Said : | |
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ccccoool poem |
| On October 25th 2008 101091 Said : | |
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I love it. The rhythm on this is very well done. |
| On October 25th 2008 11Dreamgirl11 Said : | |
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I agree. I love how you word it. |
| On October 25th 2008 poemprincess Said : | |
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I love how you word things :) |
| On October 25th 2008 joshuabrokaw01 Said : | |
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good also |


