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Life IS |
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Neckties |
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pale |
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The Life Melody |
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Breakin Through (Song Lyrics) |
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Listless Feeling of Soul Touching Hands |
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Created on 12-31-69
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Please Login to post comments| On November 3rd 2008 merck12 Said : | |
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.......its ok |
| On November 1st 2008 barbarian1 Said : | |
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is ok, a little odd but ok |
| On November 1st 2008 XxXastinXxX Said : | |
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i like it! its very well written! :] |
| On November 1st 2008 alyxxxxxxx Said : | |
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wow i'm not half bad at writing after some drinking ahaha.
actually this sucks lol. |
| On November 1st 2008 XxCloudyEyesxX Said : | |
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i like the rythm very much, and that the story is an unusual one, for poems at least. great work! |
| On November 1st 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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I like it a lot. I think it would be great to be a song though but great job. I hav a new poem "Sleepless Soul" would you check it for me? and tell me what you think about it. |
