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11/08 2008
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Passion
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Maybe Yes, Maybe No
Third time's the charm?
Maybe yes, maybe no.
Look at it differently,
open the window.
Should I stand still?
Maybe yes, maybe no.
Think of your options:
Could stay, but I'll go.
Will this work?
Maybe yes, maybe no.
Think real hard,
don't go slow.
Third time's the charm?
Maybe yes, maybe no.
Now don't question,
just hope so.
Please Login to post comments| On August 1st 2009 kraziibxtch Said: |
| awesome omg i luv ur style, check out my poems |
| On December 23rd 2008 lovethatsong Said: |
| this is reallll good(: |
| On December 5th 2008 mileykay5113 Said: |
| i love this poem!! great job!! |
| On December 1st 2008 xHickChick789x Said: |
| I can relate to this somehow. :) Awesome! |
| On November 19th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: |
| u've an intriguing brain and that is a good thing. |
| On November 11th 2008 merck12 Said: |
| love ur piece ....great job..:) |
| On November 9th 2008 poemprincess Said: |
| This is awsome I love your poems! |
| On November 9th 2008 ljay33 Said: |
| nice flow! great poem |
| On November 8th 2008 allizawesome Said: |
| I love the similarity between the stanzas, but you still kept rhythm and rhyme! Very good! |
| On November 8th 2008 Bumpkingurl Said: |
| Mmm, brings back memories from my 'thirds' with a bf.. very true, and the stanzas flow well :) |
| On November 8th 2008 barbarian1 Said: |
| this is really good, i like the flow |
| On November 8th 2008 kinzie52 Said: |
| great job. you get to the point in the perfect timing. :) |
| On November 8th 2008 Panaake Said: |
| Cool! :D |
