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Created:
11/08 2008
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356
Category:
Respect
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Happy Birthday |
Happy Birthday
I'd wish you happy birthday,
but I wouldn't know what to say
because I don't know what I think of you
or who first walked away.
Don't know if you deserve it,
can't tell if you're alright.
Bring me up, take me down.
Should I smile or frown?
I used to think I knew you,
but I was clearly wrong.
You always never knew me,
guess you waited too long.
We don't know each other,
but I know what we are:
Strangers;
only not quite.
Well happy birthday, stranger.
That's all I have to say.
Don't know quite what I think of you;
or why you cross my mind every day.
| On December 1st 2008 xHickChick789x Said: |
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| Nice flow. I really like this one. Love it! |
| On November 19th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: |
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| what a interesting style urs is. good job |
| On November 12th 2008 transgenic Said: |
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| I love it! Especially the line, "You always never knew me." |
| On November 9th 2008 poemprincess Said: |
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| :) |
| On November 9th 2008 ljay33 Said: |
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| Excellent!!! |
| On November 9th 2008 crazkoala Said: |
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| :) good job.
excellent flow |
| On November 8th 2008 allizawesome Said: |
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| Ohh jeez, your poetry is so amazing! I can totally understand where this comes from and the wording is amazing! |
| On November 8th 2008 Bumpkingurl Said: |
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| Aghh... are you reading my mind?! Fantastic poem. You really have written my thoughts! |
| On November 8th 2008 barbarian1 Said: |
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| wow, this is unique, i dont think ive ever read anything quite like it, its verry good |
| On November 8th 2008 kinzie52 Said: |


