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Happy Birthday

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Created on 11-8-08

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I'd wish you happy birthday,

but I wouldn't know what to say

because I don't know what I think of you

or who first walked away.

Don't know if you deserve it,

can't tell if you're alright.

Bring me up, take me down.

Should I smile or frown?

I used to think I knew you,

but I was clearly wrong.

You always never knew me,

guess you waited too long.

We don't know each other,

but I know what we are:

Strangers;

only not quite.

Well happy birthday, stranger.

That's all I have to say.

Don't know quite what I think of you;

or why you cross my mind every day.

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On December 1st 2008 xHickChick789x Said :

	Nice flow. I really like this one. Love it!

On November 19th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :

	what a interesting style urs is. good job

On November 12th 2008 transgenic Said :

	I love it! Especially the line, "You always never knew me."

On November 9th 2008 poemprincess Said :

	:)

On November 9th 2008 ljay33 Said :

	Excellent!!!

On November 9th 2008 crazkoala Said :

	:) good job. excellent flow

On November 8th 2008 allizawesome Said :

	Ohh jeez, your poetry is so amazing! I can totally understand where this comes from and the wording is amazing!

On November 8th 2008 Bumpkingurl Said :

	Aghh... are you reading my mind?! Fantastic poem. You really have written my thoughts!

On November 8th 2008 barbarian1 Said :

	wow, this is unique, i dont think ive ever read anything quite like it, its verry good

On November 8th 2008 kinzie52 Said :

	ok. This is pretty flippin cool. I gotta hand it to you. But you also have a unique style of writing. Your first, third, and fifth stanzas have a set pattern. Whats going on with your second and fourth stanzas? Dont get me wrong I think the poem kicked ass, but i like to ask people their intentions for writing the poems/patterns the way that they do.