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Created: 11/08 2008
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Category: Respect

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Happy Birthday

Happy Birthday

I'd wish you happy birthday,

but I wouldn't know what to say

because I don't know what I think of you

or who first walked away.

 

Don't know if you deserve it,

can't tell if you're alright.

Bring me up, take me down.

Should I smile or frown?

 

I used to think I knew you,

but I was clearly wrong.

You always never knew me,

guess you waited too long.

 

We don't know each other,

but I know what we are:

Strangers;

only not quite.

 

Well happy birthday, stranger.

That's all I have to say.

Don't know quite what I think of you;

or why you cross my mind every day.

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On December 1st 2008 xHickChick789x Said: 
xHickChick789x Nice flow. I really like this one. Love it!
On November 19th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: 
Thugnastay227 what a interesting style urs is. good job
On November 12th 2008 transgenic Said: 
transgenic I love it! Especially the line, "You always never knew me."
On November 9th 2008 poemprincess Said: 
poemprincess :)
On November 9th 2008 ljay33 Said: 
ljay33 Excellent!!!
On November 9th 2008 crazkoala Said: 
crazkoala :) good job.
excellent flow
On November 8th 2008 allizawesome Said: 
allizawesome Ohh jeez, your poetry is so amazing! I can totally understand where this comes from and the wording is amazing!
On November 8th 2008 Bumpkingurl Said: 
Bumpkingurl Aghh... are you reading my mind?! Fantastic poem. You really have written my thoughts!
On November 8th 2008 barbarian1 Said: 
barbarian1 wow, this is unique, i dont think ive ever read anything quite like it, its verry good
On November 8th 2008 kinzie52 Said: 
kinzie52 ok. This is pretty flippin cool. I gotta hand it to you. But you also have a unique style of writing. Your first, third, and fifth stanzas have a set pattern. Whats going on with your second and fourth stanzas? Dont get me wrong I think the poem kicked ass, but i like to ask people their intentions for writing the poems/patterns the way that they do.