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Created:
09/11 2007
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173
Category:
Passion
My Poems
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My mind according to my eyes |
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15
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Trust |
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15
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Frosted lies |
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15
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Hello Moon |
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14
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Adrift I would be |
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13
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From the view of another |
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11
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Finish already |
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11
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Allow me to feel |
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12
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Why? |
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6
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In turmoil my soul does stay |
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10
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Burning desire |
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11
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Forever yours |
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Who I need to be.... |
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I will describe you in that way |
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Found |
Burning desire
Burning desire.
Where have you gone?
Burning desire.
My soul feels all alone.
Burning desire.
I need you now.
Burning desire.
I don’t know how.
Burning desire.
I cry for help.
Burning desire.
Allow me to feel.
Burning desire.
Here I go.
Burning desire.
Into the world I no longer know.
Burning desire.
I feel your heat.
Burning desire.
I go there to meet.
Burning desire.
I release your flame.
Burning desire.
I will never be the same.
| On September 14th 2007 Aaquaian Said: |
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| Er... Makes me feel unoriginal to say that I like the repitition, but who cares. This was a really good poem, and it really does make one think. |
| On September 13th 2007 softballdemon Said: |
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| I agree with the others. makes me think and love the repetition. It's really good. I love it Cass. |
| On September 12th 2007 Bumpkingurl Said: |
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| I love the repetition! >.< ! |
| On September 11th 2007 Babydotz Said: |
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| humm... makes me think... |


