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Just a little something

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Created: 09/11 2007
Views: 173
Category: Passion

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Burning desire

Burning desire.

Where have you gone?

Burning desire.

My soul feels all alone.

Burning desire.

I need you now.

Burning desire.

I don’t know how.

Burning desire.

I cry for help.

Burning desire.

Allow me to feel.

Burning desire.

Here I go.

Burning desire.

Into the world I no longer know.

Burning desire.

I feel your heat.

Burning desire.

I go there to meet.

Burning desire.

I release your flame.

Burning desire.

I will never be the same.

 

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On September 14th 2007 Aaquaian Said: 
Aaquaian Er... Makes me feel unoriginal to say that I like the repitition, but who cares. This was a really good poem, and it really does make one think.
On September 13th 2007 softballdemon Said: 
softballdemon I agree with the others. makes me think and love the repetition. It's really good. I love it Cass.
On September 12th 2007 Bumpkingurl Said: 
Bumpkingurl I love the repetition! >.< !
On September 11th 2007 Babydotz Said: 
Babydotz humm... makes me think...