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Created:
09/16 2007
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151
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My Poems
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My mind according to my eyes |
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15
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Trust |
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15
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Frosted lies |
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15
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Hello Moon |
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14
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Adrift I would be |
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13
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From the view of another |
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11
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Finish already |
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11
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Allow me to feel |
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12
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Why? |
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6
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In turmoil my soul does stay |
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10
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Burning desire |
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11
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Forever yours |
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Who I need to be.... |
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I will describe you in that way |
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Forever yours
There are so many words I’ve been wanting to say
All those years that took you away.
Corruption of the poison in you
Never knowing which path you would choose
I cried endless nights never knowing your fate
Inside my despair grew into hate.
Beautiful your soul
Intoxicating your love
I hoped you had not moved onto the land up above
Among me you were
Oblivious I was
Your life a perfection
Beautiful you stayed
I cry still now
Apart we are
I will never know what would have happened long ago.
One thing is for certain my heart is forever yours to hold
| On September 19th 2007 tswieberg Said: |
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| I have to agree with California (Natasha) 100% BEAUTIFUL YOUR SOUL...INTOXICATING YOUR LOVE.....awesome. |
| On September 19th 2007 nicholas2580 Said: |
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| bound by past???....GJ |
| On September 18th 2007 softballdemon Said: |
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| awwweh. Beautiful as usual Cass. I agree you should publish it. like at poetry.com they have contests and if you win this certain one your poem will be published in a book. |
| On September 18th 2007 RainMarks Said: |
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| Wow... Yeh that's really beautiful, well written so that ones who've had experiences like that will know what you're talking about.. |
| On September 18th 2007 California1516 Said: |
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| awwwwwwwwwww i love it..wow..this is amazingly written..u should publish it!!!♥beautiful your soul..intoxicated your love..WOAH..loveddddddddd that line!!! |
| On September 18th 2007 kaitling1 Said: |
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| Love it. Allot. |
| On September 18th 2007 Babydotz Said: |
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| Aww... How sweet but kinda sad! Poetically beautiful tho! |


