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My mind according to my eyes |
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Trust |
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Frosted lies |
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Hello Moon |
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Adrift I would be |
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From the view of another |
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Finish already |
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Allow me to feel |
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Why? |
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In turmoil my soul does stay |
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Burning desire |
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Forever yours |
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Who I need to be.... |
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I will describe you in that way |
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Who I need to be....
Why do I have these thoughts?
Why am I not happy?
I struggle each day to make it my own
When all I can think is where did I go?
I disappeared each day as we changed.
Who am I?
I look in the mirror at someone less than me.
Where did I go?
The small faces I raise I see myself
But where am I inside me?
I lost my feeling of where I should be?
I have these feelings and thoughts each day.
Heavier and heavier my heart does weigh.
Release my soul allow me to be the person I know I am.
I want to feel the life I have and enjoy the life I lead.
Where did I go and where do I look to find the person I used to be?
I cry a few tears here and there,
I can not find myself anywhere.
I thought forgetting who I was, WAS the way but lost I am each and every day.
Help me find the person I am.
Laughter I crave, sadness I shun.
Please oh please help me see the rising sun.
Despair is all you bring to me.
Dear God please help me see.
The person I need to be is hard, when the person I used to be is who I crave.
I crave the laughter and no worries.
When I speak of the past they just become stories.
Stories you tell to your new friends so they can understand the person you are, and maybe help you see the person inside you need to be.
Please Login to post comments| On September 20th 2007 Pikkakard Said: |
| I love your take on this kind of common problem. Great poem. |
| On September 19th 2007 tswieberg Said: |
| I think we all forget who we are from time to time and being a mother really makes it easy to lose yourself when you have all of your time wrapped up in raising the little ones and no time for yourself. The poem is amazing and written very well. Keep writing, you will find yourself!! |
| On September 19th 2007 nicholas2580 Said: |
| not shure what to say cause this work brings out about ten or so possible topics from my piont of view.....GREAT JOB |
| On September 19th 2007 browneyes33 Said: |
| was this about life after motherhood? That's what I got form it.. Awesome job.. not that life after motherhood is bad..it just seemed you were saying you seen yourself in them but couldn't find yourself any longer within you. This was really great!! |
| On September 18th 2007 pru1989 Said: |
| very passionate.... |
| On September 18th 2007 softballdemon Said: |
| absolutely 100% amazing and beautiful. Heck I ask myself almost every minute who am i? very well written. |
| On September 18th 2007 RainMarks Said: |
| That's very well written, says well what it's meaning to. |
| On September 18th 2007 twichims Said: |
| nicely written |
| On September 18th 2007 California1516 Said: |
| also..one more thing to add..nicely written :) |
| On September 18th 2007 California1516 Said: |
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| i think alot of ppl ask the question who am i? every single day..takes along time to finally figure it all out :S |
| On September 18th 2007 kaitling1 Said: |
| Excellent. |
