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My Poems
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My mind according to my eyes |
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Trust |
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Frosted lies |
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Hello Moon |
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Adrift I would be |
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From the view of another |
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Finish already |
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Allow me to feel |
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Why? |
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In turmoil my soul does stay |
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Burning desire |
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Forever yours |
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Who I need to be.... |
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I will describe you in that way |
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I will describe you in that way
Effervescent yes effervescent
I will describe you in that way
Bubbling over with absolutely nothing to say
I see your smile light up the darkest room
Your laugh surrounds the darkest soul
Crushes and the light takes hold
Beautiful yes beautiful
I will describe you in that way
Perfect oh perfect each and every day
Beaming a smile so bright as the sun
Please oh please never stop having fun
Hilarious yes hilarious
I will describe you in that way
Knock , Knock jokes abound
Attacking my most stern frown
Erasing it from my stone cold face
Allowing a smile to take it’s place.
Mine yes mine
I will describe you in that way
I carried you inside anticipating the day
On May 16th my life was changed
The first of three you carried the torch.
Thank you for being my effervescent, beautiful, and hilarious child.
Please Login to post comments| On September 20th 2007 pinkheffalump Said: |
| at first i thot u were talking bout love, but hey surprise endings always leave an impression in the good way rite? great job i love the first two stanzas |
| On September 20th 2007 Pikkakard Said: |
| Really nice poem! Great job |
| On September 19th 2007 darkangel726 Said: |
| this is really good! their lucky to have you! |
| On September 19th 2007 Babydotz Said: |
| Aw wow good job! |
| On September 19th 2007 pru1989 Said: |
| wow i love this it seems to be very natuaral and you can feel the LOVE!! |
| On September 19th 2007 California1516 Said: |
| how you did* |
| On September 19th 2007 California1516 Said: |
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| my bday is may 16th~~ :D i love this poem..nicely written!! i like you u did the line..and said after it...i will describe you in that way |
| On September 19th 2007 Teresia07 Said: |
| awwwwwwwwww. that is lovely. I love childern...I look forward to the day I can say something so sweet about my children :) |
| On September 19th 2007 TanyaCheri Said: |
| Big Cheesy smiles:) |
| On September 19th 2007 RainMarks Said: |
| That's really beautiful, your children are lucky to have a mommy who even writes poems about them :). |
| On September 19th 2007 nicholas2580 Said: |
| very well,iknew it was your child befor refering to by ending...good job |
| On September 19th 2007 tswieberg Said: |
| I love it, This is really good, you should keep writing!! |
| On September 19th 2007 eternallpain Said: |
| awww thts really touching and amazing! |
