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Something I wrote for a long lost friendRate this Poem
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Created:
09/21 2007
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342
Category:
Joy
My Poems
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My mind according to my eyes |
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15
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Trust |
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15
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Frosted lies |
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15
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Hello Moon |
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14
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Adrift I would be |
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From the view of another |
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Finish already |
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Allow me to feel |
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Why? |
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In turmoil my soul does stay |
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10
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Burning desire |
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11
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Forever yours |
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Who I need to be.... |
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I will describe you in that way |
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Found |
Found
Where did you go…was it down the road unknown?
Were you scared without a hand to hold?
I am sorry I wasn’t there.
I’m sorry you thought I did not care.
I wondered each and every day
And hoped God would help you in his way
Now ten years has passed
Could we, should we, discuss all the years we missed
Children, our hearts and minds seemed to be
Why couldn’t we forgive so we could see.
The years missed could have been much more.
Laughter, joy, sadness, together alone no more.
I have an idea
Hope you would agree
Allow our friendship a new start
One step at a time we shall see.
Missed years we can not capture
Future ones are ours to hold.
~So glad we are in touch again~
| On September 24th 2007 run4w4ytr4in Said: |
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| lol "you took the words right off my paper" Very good job! |
| On September 23rd 2007 darkangel726 Said: |
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| wow. nice poem! |
| On September 22nd 2007 pru1989 Said: |
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| this happen so often great poem:) |
| On September 22nd 2007 alexia66 Said: |
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| awesome i love this one
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| On September 22nd 2007 zodiac3892 Said: |
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| that was a thrill to read... keep it up, i relly enjoy reading poems like this |
| On September 21st 2007 eternallpain Said: |
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| I LOVE IT!!!!! amazing ... yup friendship is hard to keep alive, nd am glad u 2 r back! :D |
| On September 21st 2007 jrslater Said: |
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| it is wonderful i am niether a poet friend but i must admit that was awesome |
| On September 21st 2007 Purpledcow Said: |
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| Awesome! |
| On September 21st 2007 amptone Said: |
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| Killer work, I am not a poet friend, it takes alot for me to stop and read, but woo hoo. |
| On September 21st 2007 transgenic Said: |
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| I can relate to this...Awesome work! |
| On September 21st 2007 California1516 Said: |
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| very nice!! i like it alot :) |
| On September 21st 2007 Babydotz Said: |
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| Wow im impressed! very good! |
| On September 21st 2007 SweetDeath26 Said: |
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| Aww.. That's so sad! But I love it. D"= |
| On September 21st 2007 TanyaCheri Said: |
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| Sniffle. This is great, I think just about everyone has a friend like this:) |
| On September 21st 2007 Pikkakard Said: |
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| OMG!!! You won't believe how much I can relate to this poem. Amazing |
| On September 21st 2007 Teresia07 Said: |
| On September 21st 2007 tswieberg Said: |
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| That is really sweet, have you shown your friend your poem? I wish you all the luck. Great poem. |
| On September 21st 2007 RainMarks Said: |
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| I like that a lot, the best so far in a way. Really good. |


