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the passion to live

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Created: 01/14 2007
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Category: Passion

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Found

Adrift I would be

Could this be....a mirrored image of me.

So small, will so strong.....against this world you choose to belong.

Fighting to breathe.....not wanting to leave.

The machines help ou hold on....me....I am praying for you my son.

Your body so small it is true....your heart so weak and new.

Look in my eyes and you will see....all the love of you flows through me.

The hope and strength I give to you.

Please dear God let me keep your gift....for without him I would be adrift.

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On July 29th 2007 softballdemon Said: 
softballdemon that is so touching... the feeling is shown well
On July 16th 2007 dmaynor78 Said: 
dmaynor78 It made me cry. I have 5 little ones, but never had to bare the thought of loseing them. They where all healthy babies, even the twins(5lbs 3oz, 5lbs 1oz)
On June 19th 2007 sandevil Said: 
sandevil excellent
On March 27th 2007 dureall Said: 
dureall ok this brought out a tear..first the peom then what Sunny said below me. I my self has a baby boy I have not seen in 4 years. My heart breaks every day.
On February 2nd 2007 sunny102 Said: 
sunny102 Cass, may I have a copy of this poem?
On February 2nd 2007 sunny102 Said: 
sunny102 Wow, This touches home for me...I lost a baby boy many years ago...he was born way too early and his lungs were not developed. He only weighed 1-lb and 9oz.s. I named him Scott Chase. He lived for five weeks and died on Thanksgiving day 1983. They put him in my arms for the first time and turned off the ventilator.....he slipped away as I was holding him.
On January 16th 2007 xinxthexdarkx Said: 
xinxthexdarkx that is soo good I love it