Email:
Password:

Created By

Author's Comments

viewpoint through someone else's eyes

Rate this Poem

+13

Info

Link:
Created: 01/28 2007
Views: 176
Category: Pain

My Poems

+ 23
My mind according to my eyes
+ 15
Trust
+ 15
Frosted lies
+ 15
Hello Moon
+ 14
Adrift I would be
+ 13
From the view of another
+ 11
Finish already
+ 11
Allow me to feel
+ 12
Why?
+ 6
In turmoil my soul does stay
+ 10
Burning desire
+ 11
Forever yours
+ 14
Who I need to be....
+ 27
I will describe you in that way
+ 28
Found

From the view of another

Secrets abound beneath your frown, Along the soft crease of your brow.

Your hands twitch with dampness

Why oh why did you get in this mess...you know she knows.

But the untruthful words continue to flow...help yourself.

Release your thoughts, release your true self......Go be with your disheartening desires.

She could go on I think....but what of you......

Will you be strong, could you carry on?

Or will the only truth be that she was it.

The one, alone, to walk the long, rocky road with you.

You say your love is strong but my dear I say you are wrong.

The only truth I see to be

Is your desire to be with she......She the other.

She the other who loves no other, but only destroys all she touches.

Go and be but leave your "love" with me.

Take care of her I will beacuse beneath this chest lies a void you see...only she can truly fill.

I hear her cry on a day to day, I feel her tears as I wash them away.

At night I get down on my knees and pray that your release of her would be so great beacuse She is not YOUR fate.

She deserves so much but you give so little except in the way of pain.

Your lies she believes the truth she denies......

 

Last night she cried her last tear, she acknowledged her worst fear,

She placed her gun upon her lips so sweet and then moments later was taken by a ghostly fleet.

Damn you you hateful beast, you took her from me with your watchful hand.

You are claiming no fault but I know the truth ...if you had only let go but you are the one who killed her soul.

Please Login to post comments
On July 29th 2007 softballdemon Said: 
softballdemon full of emotion. you word things well and get the feeling across in an amazing way.
On July 16th 2007 Jeremy062902 Said: 
Jeremy062902 Wow ~ that was intense. Lots of raw emotion. Girl, I Loved the line - "Take care of her I will beacuse beneath this chest lies a void you see...only she can truly fill." I love the way you worded it! I wanna see more! =)
On March 27th 2007 dureall Said: 
dureall lot of emotion here.