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My Poems
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My mind according to my eyes |
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Trust |
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Frosted lies |
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Hello Moon |
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Adrift I would be |
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From the view of another |
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Finish already |
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Allow me to feel |
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Why? |
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In turmoil my soul does stay |
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Burning desire |
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Forever yours |
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Who I need to be.... |
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I will describe you in that way |
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Found |
Finish already
You left me with so much pain. Alone my heart will forever strain.
Finish, Finish
Stop this pain please say you will. quit toying with my soul so that I may once again feel.
Finish, Finish
Release your claws allow me to breathe. Deep inside my anger does seethe.
Finish, Finish
I hear your steps and your shadow does grow. I hear your heart beat and I smell your stench.
Finish, Finish
The cold sharpness along my neck. I fear not for I know what is next.
Finish, Finish
You keep this charade going day after day. While starving here I slowing fade away.
Finish, Finish
You laugh in the darkness. I am evil you say. You are saving another by ending it here.
Finish, Finish
The coldness agin, moving this time. Now the warm flows a light I do see. You finished the job and the darkness you feel takes ahold your heart and screaming out you do say, "I love you forever and always. Your life could not go on. Unincluded was I and you were my own. No one can take what is mine. You wanted it finished. The deed is done. Oh my god what have I done?"
Please Login to post comments| On September 4th 2007 Babydotz Said: |
| Ha I like it! |
| On July 29th 2007 softballdemon Said: |
| I agree very intense. Amazing and wonderful. |
| On July 16th 2007 Jeremy062902 Said: |
| Strong finish. I like it. You've an intensity in your writings. =) |
| On June 19th 2007 sandevil Said: |
| this is great |
| On May 13th 2007 California1516 Said: |
| wow..intense..very good though :D |
