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Just a little something

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Created: 07/07 2007
Views: 170
Category: Respect

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Found

Allow me to feel

Fly me through this life I shall lead

Allow me to feel the wind,

Brace my hand yet loosen when I breathe

Allow me to feel the wind,

Place me under your wing

Allow me to feel the wind,

Be my landing when I should falter

Allow me to feel the wind.

 

You helped me through my life

Thank you for letting me feel the wind,

You knew the pain that I felt

Thank you foe letting me feel the wind,

When I ran with trouble by my side you took a step aside

Thank you for letting me feel the wind.

 

I feel the worry you must have felt

Allow me to feel the wind,

I sense the strain of their little lives they lead

Allow me to feel the wind,

Their words light up the night sky and without words they say

Thank you for letting me feel the wind.

 

 

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On September 25th 2007 SweetDeath26 Said: 
SweetDeath26 Awww.. So sad
On August 6th 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said: 
Lookin4TruLuv I agree with Jeremy062902. I was thinking of the same song as I read this. Beautifully written. Creative and sweet. I like this.
On July 29th 2007 softballdemon Said: 
softballdemon That's amazing. I love it.
On July 16th 2007 Jeremy062902 Said: 
Jeremy062902 Kinda reminds me of the song Wind Beneath My Wings. I like this take on it.
On July 7th 2007 TanyaCheri Said: 
TanyaCheri :)