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Another thing I worte

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Created: 07/07 2007
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Category: Pain

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Found

Why?

Why do you cause this grief?

Why can you not see?

Why are these tears falling so easily?

 

I jarred myself to reality that is not there,

No one is there.

I cried because my world is ash,

Falling from the dimly lit sky,

Landing upon my chin.

Murky is the water,

I can no longer face the truth.

 

Without your love my life is lost,

With I am surely through,

Drawn two directions of what is a dangerous fate,

My ideas swept along the thorns,

While my heart has been shattered by the storms.

 

Your love a poison of which I am dying from,

This drought of desire rages through me like wildfire.

 

I beg of you please release,

Undo your clutches on me,

This is the only way I fear .

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On July 16th 2007 Jeremy062902 Said: 
Jeremy062902 Very passionately written. I love the line "My ideas swept along the thorns" I'd love to see more!
On July 11th 2007 Pikkakard Said: 
Pikkakard I like that a lot
On July 10th 2007 softballdemon Said: 
softballdemon that's deep
On July 7th 2007 TanyaCheri Said: 
TanyaCheri woah