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Created:
07/07 2007
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181
Category:
Pain
My Poems
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My mind according to my eyes |
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15
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Trust |
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15
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Frosted lies |
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15
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Hello Moon |
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14
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Adrift I would be |
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13
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From the view of another |
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11
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Finish already |
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11
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Allow me to feel |
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Why? |
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In turmoil my soul does stay |
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10
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Burning desire |
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Forever yours |
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Who I need to be.... |
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I will describe you in that way |
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Found |
Why?
Why do you cause this grief?
Why can you not see?
Why are these tears falling so easily?
I jarred myself to reality that is not there,
No one is there.
I cried because my world is ash,
Falling from the dimly lit sky,
Landing upon my chin.
Murky is the water,
I can no longer face the truth.
Without your love my life is lost,
With I am surely through,
Drawn two directions of what is a dangerous fate,
My ideas swept along the thorns,
While my heart has been shattered by the storms.
Your love a poison of which I am dying from,
This drought of desire rages through me like wildfire.
I beg of you please release,
Undo your clutches on me,
This is the only way I fear .
| On July 16th 2007 Jeremy062902 Said: |
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| Very passionately written. I love the line "My ideas swept along the thorns" I'd love to see more! |
| On July 11th 2007 Pikkakard Said: |
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| I like that a lot |
| On July 10th 2007 softballdemon Said: |
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| that's deep |
| On July 7th 2007 TanyaCheri Said: |
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| woah |


