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its short and shitty, but whatever lolRate this Poem
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Created:
07/23 2008
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224
Category:
Passion
My Poems
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Poor Fool
Tasting desire.
Playing with fire,
Seductions grasp, pulling me in.
Just a child,
Toying with charm.
Nothing but putty,
I've done no harm.
Words are meaningless,
I use them too well.
From daggers to kisses,
The sting is sharper in disguise.
In my eyes,
Your haven awaits.
Love, your shelter.
Hope, your food.
Whithin my eyes, your heart shall be whole.
Your smile triggers the spite in me,
The raw, distiguished, hatred.
Under the warm skin,
Lies a black hole lined with vindictive manipulation.
Piercing glares with every turn of your head,
Bright eyed smiles at your every glance.
This game is all too fun,
But don't worry,
I love you too, baby. | On July 25th 2008 BatxCountry Said: |
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| Amazing. Absolutely amazing |
| On July 25th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: |
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| the duality. the kind and wicked the yin and yang. the internal struggle we all deal with. this was a poem a realy enjoyed reading. impressive. and wow. |
| On July 25th 2008 xXpyroJesseXx Said: |
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| this is awesome! its so fucking twisted lol |
| On July 24th 2008 Kidojidoari Said: |
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| Ooh~ I really like tis~ ^o^ Nice ending~ Quite bittersweet, my love. |
| On July 24th 2008 max5892 Said: |
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| nice..i like the sorta rhyme but the fact that its not regular kinda makes it interesting...anywho..awsome job... |
| On July 24th 2008 Calypso32 Said: |
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| haha, I do like the vindictive, vengeful innocence this conveys, you have such a way of blending wry, cutting irony and sweetness, sugar and spice in all honesty. Brava!!~L |
| On July 24th 2008 deadpoet Said: |
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| oh this was absolutely wonderful |
| On July 23rd 2008 halfemoon Said: |
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| Wow. It's great. Very detailed. Some are too short, some too long, but you hit just right! =D |
| On July 23rd 2008 XrenaissanceX9 Said: |
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| .................. 0_o I like!!! Very....whats the word....? umm...spitefully meaningful? Idk... *hugs* |
| On July 23rd 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said: |
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| This was truly amazing kitty dear. I love how you wrote this. :] |


