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I Saved All My Love For You
I paid fifteen dollars for a prostitute, With too much makeup and a broken shoe, But i'll be savin' all my love for you. I never spoke 'I love you' 'til I cursed you in vain, I never felt my heartstrings until I nearly went insane. And I never saw your tears until they rolled down your face. I'd come home but i'm afraid that you won't take me back. So I smoke my friends down to the filter, And I got a bad liver and a broken heart, Yeah, I drunk me a river since you tore me apart. I don't have a drinking problem, 'cept when I can't get a drink, But it don't douse the flames that are started by dames. Now i lay me down to sleep, To put those scarlet ribbons in my hair, 'Cause I'm just a thorn without my rose.And all it took was a sweet little bullet
From a pretty blue gun
| On December 21st 2008 max5892 Said: |
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| wow. this is awsome. full of emotion and i can feel it. tis amazing!!
i agree with the person below me, this should totaly be a song lol |
| On December 7th 2008 ViableFate Said: |
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| This sounds like a song(?)
"and all it took was a sweet little bullet..."
This is fantastic. |
| On August 9th 2008 GeonnStwci Said: |
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| Whoa, this was very strong, well written. |
| On August 6th 2008 deadpoet Said: |
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| this was even better than the last. this one was amazing, beautiful, touching and deep. |
| On August 6th 2008 Gigglez200969 Said: |
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| wow i really like this one when i was reading it i realized that i could kinda relate great job!! |
| On August 6th 2008 badbitch9408 Said: |
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| its was really good u should look at minez |
| On August 6th 2008 TheBranster Said: |
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| beautiful yet sad poem. hope ya feeling well |
| On August 6th 2008 Calypso32 Said: |
| On August 6th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said: |
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| Damn, kitty, this was amazing. I love the use of metaphors here, it was so...raw and powerful. I love it |
| On August 6th 2008 sonic64 Said: |
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| depressing and selfdestructive |
| On August 6th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: |
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| holy cow........is all i can think to say...great poem kitty |


