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Dedicated to Calypso33

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Created: 08/06 2008
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Category: Pain

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I Saved All My Love For You

I paid fifteen dollars for a prostitute,

With too much makeup and a broken shoe,

But i'll be savin' all my love for you.

I never spoke 'I love you' 'til I cursed you in vain,

I never felt my heartstrings until I nearly went insane.

And I never saw your tears until they rolled down your face.

I'd come home but i'm afraid that you won't take me back.

So I smoke my friends down to the filter,

And I got a bad liver and a broken heart,

Yeah, I drunk me a river since you tore me apart.

I don't have a drinking problem, 'cept when I can't get a drink,

But it don't douse the flames that are started by dames.

Now i lay me down to sleep,

And all it took was a sweet little bullet
From a pretty blue gun

To put those scarlet ribbons in my hair,

'Cause I'm just a thorn without my rose.

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On December 21st 2008 max5892 Said: 
max5892 wow. this is awsome. full of emotion and i can feel it. tis amazing!! i agree with the person below me, this should totaly be a song lol
On December 7th 2008 ViableFate Said: 
ViableFate This sounds like a song(?) "and all it took was a sweet little bullet..." This is fantastic.
On August 9th 2008 GeonnStwci Said: 
GeonnStwci Whoa, this was very strong, well written.
On August 6th 2008 deadpoet Said: 
deadpoet this was even better than the last. this one was amazing, beautiful, touching and deep.
On August 6th 2008 Gigglez200969 Said: 
Gigglez200969 wow i really like this one when i was reading it i realized that i could kinda relate great job!!
On August 6th 2008 badbitch9408 Said: 
badbitch9408 its was really good u should look at minez
On August 6th 2008 TheBranster Said: 
TheBranster beautiful yet sad poem. hope ya feeling well
On August 6th 2008 Calypso32 Said: 
Calypso32 Smoke my friends down to the filter" reminds me of the song on Shrek 2, y'know, "I like my town, with a little drop of poison.." etc. I am flattered that you'd dedicate one to me, though its raw and embittered, great work Kitty!!~L
On August 6th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said: 
Andy2Anomaly Damn, kitty, this was amazing. I love the use of metaphors here, it was so...raw and powerful. I love it
On August 6th 2008 sonic64 Said: 
my picture
depressing and selfdestructive
On August 6th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: 
Thugnastay227 holy cow........is all i can think to say...great poem kitty