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Never Trust A Scarecrow
I can see that you are lonesome just like me, and it being late, You'd like some company, This ain't a purchase, it's a rental. I'll tell you all my secrets, but I'll lie about my past I'll meet you at the bottom of a bottle of bargain Scotch And we'll fumble back to your place. I hope I don’t fall in love with you, 'Cause falling in love just makes me blue. The ribbon 'round your neck I'll leave behind the clothes, I wore when I was with you, All i need's my railroad boots, and my leather jacket, as i say goodbye to tonight's arms. I'll never kiss your lips again, or break your heart, As I say goodbye, I'll say goodbye, The only thing I'm taking is the scarf off of your clothesline. I'll hurry past your chest of drawers, and your broken window chimes, As I say goodbye, I'll say goodbye, say goodbye to tonight's arms. Turn around to look at you, the morning light has washed your face, And I think that I just fell in love with you. Although my heart is breaking, i steal away out through your blinds, For soon, you will be waking.
Against your skin that's pale as bone,
Is my favorite thing I've seen of yours.
| On December 21st 2008 max5892 Said: |
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| ooo you're a good peot kitty! i really like this one. good job |
| On December 7th 2008 ViableFate Said: |
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| This is really beautiful. It's also really painful. This whole metaphor is incredible. It's original and you're really talented. |
| On October 4th 2008 ArtemisStar Said: |
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| Wow this is so good. I love even the title! |
| On September 20th 2008 merck12 Said: |
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| wtf.......nice job....keep it up dude..;] |
| On August 22nd 2008 chickenbroth Said: |
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| This is incredible, loved it. |
| On August 6th 2008 XxCloudyEyesxX Said: |
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| wow. you blew me away... |
| On August 6th 2008 deadpoet Said: |
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| this was absolutely beautiful sissy kitty (im about to read your other one) and what happened between you and jesse? =( |
| On August 6th 2008 chaotickitty12 Said: |
| On August 6th 2008 xXpyroJesseXx Said: |
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| a whore in your words and in your body. hhmmm. why dont you tell these wonderful people how you live your life? how you're nothing but a cock tease and a bitch? hhmmm? |
| On August 6th 2008 watrgrl Said: |
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| that was very good.and i like the title. |
| On August 6th 2008 TheBranster Said: |
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| your writing is wonderful. thanks for sharing another great poem |
| On August 6th 2008 Calypso32 Said: |
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| It was slightly reminiscent of moonlight stealing away, but again, I've never seen a poem like this before either, So honestly transparent. Lovely!~L |
| On August 6th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said: |
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| I have to agree with nastay. Truly a unique piece. Amazing. |
| On August 6th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: |
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| never miss an oppurtunity for what could be something wonderful. she will regret leaving his bed. never read a poem like this one before. great read |


