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Created: 05/14 2008
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Category: Other

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She is Peace.

She meets my gaze

with eyes serene

enticing calm

serenity.

 

Enlightenment

way beyond seeing

connecting with

her inner being.

 

Cleansing deep breath

a rarity

immersed in new found clarity. 

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On August 4th 2008 muse4apoem Said: 
muse4apoem Love it sooo much! I love the 1st 4 lines!
On June 22nd 2008 deadpoet Said: 
deadpoet this was beautiful, especially for being such a short poem. you started it off wonderful and ended it just as good.
On June 6th 2008 audica Said: 
audica i love it!!
On May 26th 2008 orangefizzpop Said: 
orangefizzpop I felt refreshed after reading this, awesome job!
On May 16th 2008 lardpiles Said: 
lardpiles it's cute and epiphanic. It's meaning is deeper than the first glance. (to me) i love it.
On May 16th 2008 TyffaniKnott Said: 
TyffaniKnott VERY NICE!!!
On May 15th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said: 
sixtiesdoll I really like this. It's descriptive~ and love the style.
On May 14th 2008 xHickChick789x Said: 
xHickChick789x short and simple. I really like this. Nice work! :)