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How are you going to use me today?Rate this Poem
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Created:
06/28 2008
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222
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Other
My Poems
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134
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I'm a dark person |
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58
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Getaway |
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40
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Priority |
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59
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"These years are the best of your life" |
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109
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Fuck off |
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67
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Love Hurts |
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62
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Emo Girl |
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34
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No deeper feeling |
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31
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Not so funny |
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Stealthy |
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27
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Their Vision Of Me |
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30
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To my science teacher |
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28
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In this pile of your shit |
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50
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When I cry |
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Knots |
Eager
Your like a puppy
eager to play
eager to please
eager to be...
loved.
Running to fetch
another's desires
rewarded breifly
with a pat on the head.
What can I do for you?
How can I help?
What do you need?
How are you going to use me today?
You live these questions.
Create time to discover
your own questions.
Or be forever chained
like the lonely mutt
you've let yourself become.
Please Login to post comments| On August 14th 2008 goldfishmurder Said: |
| Interesting view. Very well done. |
| On August 12th 2008 Lookin4TruLuv Said: |
| I love the idea. Very creative. I like that you made so many comparisons that link the person to a dog-like behavior. The more I read, the more I believed it was a dog you were talking about. Good job! |
| On July 13th 2008 audica Said: |
| wow. i really love this poem. |
| On July 11th 2008 poopstix Said: |
| wow, nuff said |
| On July 8th 2008 lardpiles Said: |
| it's very nice and idk how to discribe it. but great. ^_^ !! |
| On July 8th 2008 hpfan731 Said: |
| powerful! |
| On July 2nd 2008 ALIESAM21 Said: |
| Lovely! |
| On June 30th 2008 xHickChick789x Said: |
| Very thoughtful... I like it! Wonderful work! |
| On June 29th 2008 onelove6fs Said: |
| wow this is pretty good |
| On June 29th 2008 ChristieSaya Said: |
| This is so unique and different. I love this! Keep it up! |
| On June 29th 2008 twilight023 Said: |
| I like is one alot. if you don't mind me asking. is this about someone you know? Anyways I think this is really good. keep it up |
| On June 28th 2008 blueyedshababe Said: |
| straight forward and to the point. nicely done |
| On June 28th 2008 101091 Said: |
| Wow. Very different but very well written. Great job. I love it. |
| On June 28th 2008 Kidojidoari Said: |
| Simple and it has a good concept. :] It made me smile, despite the underlining loathing of the patheticness (is that even a word? xD) of that person. :0 |
| On June 28th 2008 sweetkelli16 Said: |
| I like it... it's simple but yet there's a meaning behind it. good job!! |
| On June 28th 2008 muse4apoem Said: |
| Not your best. But I love the idea behind it. Keep me posted on new stuff. |
| On June 28th 2008 MaraLicious177 Said: |
| i love how simple n fairly short it is but it has so much meaning...im still thinking about it. good job |
| On June 28th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said: |
| Wow i like this simple, unique, and it conveys a lot of feeling. Good job. |
