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Everyone's a player, everyone's a pawn.Rate this Poem
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Created:
07/03 2008
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255
Category:
Love
My Poems
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To my science teacher |
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Just a Fucked Up Game
Lately I've been feeling
like I've simply had enough
feeling like I'm drowning
in my half empty cup.
Some'd say my life is peachy
but all I can do is cry
I can't believe that right now
my cheeks are still dry.
I just keep making
the same damn mistakes
no wonder I don't have any friends
woudn't want to scare all the bitches away
that's why I pretend.
I pretend I'm happy
I pretend I'm sane
I pretend I'm not pretending
it's just one fucked up game.
Everyone's a player
everyone's a pawn
everyone's a loser
until everyone's gone.
Please Login to post comments| On August 16th 2008 audica Said: |
| omg!!!! i loved how this flowed and the last stanza thingy was awesome!! |
| On July 14th 2008 ALIESAM21 Said: |
| I love the last 4 lines! It is ao awesome!!!! You are a terrific writer! |
| On July 11th 2008 poopstix Said: |
| my fav i luv the relation to a game but my fav line is = feeling like im drowning in my half empty cup, it says a lot and i just luv it |
| On July 10th 2008 JustifyMisery Said: |
| This is amazing! Nice work! |
| On July 7th 2008 xHickChick789x Said: |
| Wow, how powerful, but it's great. Nice work! |
| On July 6th 2008 deadpoet Said: |
| deep, and beautiful. |
| On July 6th 2008 bmullinax0517 Said: |
| very good...i love it....it explains soooooooo much |
| On July 5th 2008 Kidojidoari Said: |
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| I really like this!! It's so awesome~ *claps* One of mah faves!! ^^ :] |
| On July 4th 2008 muse4apoem Said: |
| Actaully I don't think it's your best. But I really liked reading it! :) |
| On July 4th 2008 Mogeygriffin Said: |
| a lot of ppl feel that way
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| On July 4th 2008 ChristieSaya Said: |
| nice. very deep! |
| On July 4th 2008 onaipwolf Said: |
| nicely written. You break away from the form a bit, but it's still good. :) |
| On July 4th 2008 xXkenzieXz Said: |
| thats a kick ass poem........i love it!!!!! |
| On July 3rd 2008 tiffany1058 Said: |
| OMGosh i love it so sad but AMAZING AND NICLY SAID |
| On July 3rd 2008 tiffany1058 Said: |
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| OMGosh i love it so sad but AMAZING AND NICLY SAID |
| On July 3rd 2008 MaraLicious177 Said: |
| wow. powerful. love it |
| On July 3rd 2008 barbarian1 Said: |
| verry good |
| On July 3rd 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said: |
| wow this was great. I love it! :D |
| On July 3rd 2008 CharTheKnight Said: |
| OOooh Love the content. I think the format is interesting in how you went in the lines: 4,4,5,4,4. :D Good stuff. |
| On July 3rd 2008 onelove6fs Said: |
| thats amazing.i love the title.the first part is my faverite |
