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neon lights glow through my nights.Rate this Poem
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Created:
08/02 2008
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171
Category:
Love
My Poems
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Knots |
Dark Ease.
My days are like a prison cell
I don't have room to breath.
Then neon lights glow throught my nights
the dark puts me at ease.
His arm around me comforts me
like calm before a storm.
His love, it wraps around me
his kisses keep me warm.
Suddenly he's far away
I'm once again alone.
I guess he didn't want to stay
I"m left cold to the bone.
Please Login to post comments| On December 7th 2008 PeterSteeleYum Said: |
| I love the first 4 lines :D |
| On November 25th 2008 poopstix Said: |
| Amazing poem. Simply put. One of my favorites. |
| On August 16th 2008 mypoeticrage Said: |
| Another good one |
| On August 16th 2008 audica Said: |
| i loved how this one flowed together nicely. great job!! |
| On August 6th 2008 xHickChick789x Said: |
| sweet and I love the rhyming... keep up the great work! |
| On August 5th 2008 lardpiles Said: |
| warm fuzzy feelings. |
| On August 2nd 2008 JustifyMisery Said: |
| Nice i love the rhyming KMp |
| On August 2nd 2008 Mogeygriffin Said: |
| I like the rhyming factor, you do it well. |
| On August 2nd 2008 muse4apoem Said: |
| I feel like this could be longer. But I really like what I have read so far! Your a good writer. :) |
| On August 2nd 2008 deadpoet Said: |
| its the type of poem that makes you sad...then you feel the warmth in it and become happy yet...left to be sad again once you read the end. beautiful. |
| On August 2nd 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said: |
| This is soooo awesome :D I love it. |
