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You know what, bitch?Rate this Poem
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Created:
08/14 2008
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360
Category:
Anger
My Poems
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To my science teacher |
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In this pile of your shit |
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Knots |
I hope.
You know what, bitch?
I hope you still think about me
as your hand
slips under
your blankets tonight.
Ohhh... It's wrong
but it feels so right.
I hope you can't get to sleep
knowing what you left behind
I hope the memories haunt you
the taste of me taunts you..
I hope you can't get me off of your mind.
I hope you find..
That you can't eat without me
can't think without me
can't live without me...
I hope you die.
Please Login to post comments| On August 22nd 2008 mypoeticrage Said: |
| wow, such a loving hatred |
| On August 19th 2008 edwardlover92 Said: |
| angry, i like it |
| On August 18th 2008 gonzo4201 Said: |
| haha!! definitely, Definitely can relate to this, AWESOME JOB!! |
| On August 17th 2008 UnSane420 Said: |
| this is angry but i like it!! very good job |
| On August 16th 2008 JustifyMisery Said: |
| amazing!
you have such an edge
i love your work
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| On August 15th 2008 ALIESAM21 Said: |
| Venting is always a good way to release your hate good job on the poem! Glad you got someof your felings out! I really loved it! I love all your work! I have new poems! |
| On August 15th 2008 ChristieSaya Said: |
| It seems that you really hate this person! This poem is so strong. Nice. |
| On August 15th 2008 muse4apoem Said: |
| There is alot a wrath in this! I mean oh my god! It hits you as it's sappose to! Good job! |
| On August 14th 2008 kriskris222 Said: |
| Love it! |
| On August 14th 2008 101091 Said: |
| I really like it. |
| On August 14th 2008 Jabip14 Said: |
| way good emotion! i love it!!! :) |
| On August 14th 2008 hpfan731 Said: |
| wow. i'd be scared to get you mad! i don't think i've ever been as angry as you are in this poem....but you portray it so well! |
| On August 14th 2008 audica Said: |
| man! i love the emotion put into this. amazing poem. great job!!! |
| On August 14th 2008 bayleebroken Said: |
| woooow this is good and somewhat reminds me of something i would write. |
| On August 14th 2008 rageoholic456 Said: |
| it sounds a bit like eminems song "stan". sorry no likey. |
| On August 14th 2008 UnSane420 Said: |
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| this is mean but i like it!!!! good work so much emtions i love the way you expressed it!!! |
| On August 14th 2008 Kidojidoari Said: |
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| Holy crap, this is so edgy~
I love it!! ^o^ |
| On August 14th 2008 deadpoet Said: |
| definitely aggressive. nice. |
| On August 14th 2008 rocker44chick Said: |
| nice...someone shouldn't of messed w u huh!!=) |
| On August 14th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said: |
| Wooo tell that bastard :D. Great poem, but of course all of yours are :D |
| On August 14th 2008 Laralei Said: |
| mmm teenage angst and anger. Tastes good ^_^ I like these poems better than love anytime! |
| On August 14th 2008 lillex64 Said: |
| wow! this is good! |
| On August 14th 2008 Realmuckoy Said: |
| WOW. I can feel all the anger and frustration. Love the word choice too. :)))
Well I hope the guy reads this haha. Great job! :D |
| On August 14th 2008 CassieZ Said: |
| Clearly you were angry, but most likely you had a right to be. It's good when readers can feel the poet's emotions. Nicely written, keep up the good work :) |
| On August 14th 2008 Extremist12 Said: |
| Wow the emotion in this. Let it all out :D |
