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Created:
04/02 2007
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616
Category:
Passion
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lifeless
A lifeless body lying on the cold broken concrete. Lonelyness thick in the air. Poisoning every chamber in his lungs. Does anyone see him? Hundreds of people not willing to help this lifeless man. Visions of a women. A women holding his love, his world in her vary hands. Pulling away throught the pillars of his broken heart. Every beat of his heart playing to the music of his love for her. A last kiss sucking his final breath away. Away his soul went.
Please Login to post comments| On July 29th 2008 CassieZ Said: |
| Oh wow, this was really deep. Nice job. |
| On April 26th 2007 Darkrisky Said: |
| really deep and descriptive. great work |
| On April 21st 2007 Averex Said: |
| whoa thats really good |
| On April 20th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said: |
| it's lovely |
| On April 12th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said: |
| simply elegant and breath taking! |
| On April 9th 2007 dianaizlikewow Said: |
| very nice....piece of WORK |
| On April 7th 2007 bobblehead310 Said: |
| thats good |
| On April 3rd 2007 imbored9909 Said: |
| i reread it again today n i love it, this time i actually understood and comprehended wut it meant |
| On April 3rd 2007 ivy81 Said: |
| i like this but youneed to work on your format^^ |
| On April 3rd 2007 gabbes Said: |
| :( *tear* |
| On April 2nd 2007 neverfree Said: |
| wow! that is really good chrissey.keep up the poetry u are really good at it. |
| On April 2nd 2007 DaCiscoKid Said: |
| When i die,i wanna go out like that.I Love It. |
| On April 2nd 2007 FamousOne777 Said: |
| you should have waited till midnight so it will be on the top for the day tomorrow. Besides that very good poem lol. You are very talented |
| On April 2nd 2007 metalpat Said: |
| its nice |
| On April 2nd 2007 SN0W Said: |
| fine work. very nice |
