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Created: 04/07 2007
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Category: Tragedy

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A Lovers Pain

Swollen eyes, cheeks red and warm, swollen drops pouring out of her lonely hazel eyes. Love, acceptance, care, thats all she asked for. Feeling dry, empty, and alone inside. Without question, she gave him everything she had. It seemed that no one cared for what she wanted. Her words unable to come out past her lips and through her thick sobs. Laying on her floor, hitting herself where her heart once was, but now is no more. Hallow it was as it made an echo. Crawling on the floor so desperatly for for his picture, she searches through her diary with tattoos of memories upon these pages. Grasping the picture, thick drops of tears eating her frozen past. Placing the picture on her bed she rocks herself to sleep, as her envious pillow eats her tears. She swears she cant live without him. Not another day of this pain. Struggling to remember past the moment he walked away she tries to think of what went wrong.  Loosing all hope, all faith as the minutes go by. She is lost in the awaking of the new day as the sun fears to appear it hides behind its shadows.  Cant he see the pain he has caused her? All my heart helt cries? As hours go by she doesnt want them to unravel.  She writes a letter saying that she will always love him.  As the stars kiss her goodbye that night, her mother knocks on her door. She wouldn't answer, so she calls for him to quick kick the door down. As the door is ripped from its roots, they discover her on the floor sucking her final breaths. Holding her in his lap she smiles and raises her hand to his cheek. "I'm sorry, please forgive me" , he pleades. She smiles as her dead hand drops to the floor. He was too late,  she was gone. All he does is scream. She finally ended her suffering.

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On June 5th 2007 charissa14 Said: 
charissa14 wow, thats the first time a poem about love has given me chill bumps
On May 9th 2007 CLP64 Said: 
CLP64 wow ur hella good at this stuff!
On April 29th 2007 whitegurl2174 Said: 
whitegurl2174 pretty good. first good one i have come across on this website =)
On April 27th 2007 hotpants21 Said: 
hotpants21 i love all of the adjectives, you put a lot of detail in to things!
On April 26th 2007 Darkrisky Said: 
Darkrisky you are very good with your words and imagery! you can feel the emotion in everything you write and it's amazing!
On April 26th 2007 OreoCat Said: 
OreoCat wow, very good.
On April 20th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said: 
xxcassiejayxx very emotional... that's how i'd feel if my fiance left me...
On April 7th 2007 blutess Said: 
blutess this is something else. your really good.
On April 7th 2007 tiffyg2010 Said: 
tiffyg2010 wow this was really emotional. it was really good
On April 7th 2007 XdeXadXinXsiXd Said: 
XdeXadXinXsiXd wow that was so powerful
On April 7th 2007 kmoneyx Said: 
kmoneyx this is powerful and i could really picture like every thing. it's really good.(=
On April 7th 2007 yisheplayin15 Said: 
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wow..... this poem is soo powerful im not even joking....... guyz should say what they need to say sooner and not wait til something tragic like this happens...
On April 7th 2007 SN0W Said: 
SN0W wow...my eyes got all teary :(
On April 7th 2007 gabbes Said: 
gabbes ........ *snifle* :(