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In class thinking about two ppl.

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Created: 05/17 2007
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Category: Other

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I Rise

I Rise

Cut me with your harsh lies
Thats ok
As my blood flows just as your lies shoot out
Thats ok
But don't for one second believe that you've killed who I really am
You may trample my dreams 
But like the salt of my tears evaporate they rise lighter than dust...
just as i rise stronger like brick walls... that block your bitter lies. 
For one friend... one person is there..
Hold me close!
With lips pale and still..my old love for you dies..
But my friend be still.. for you do not know how longingly i seek your presence. 
You come to me like day dreams of a sweet lover
For you i wait
I wont doubt that I will meet you
To make sure I'll never loose you. 

 

 

This poem in the beginning was written for someone that puts me down a lot... and then in the end... its for my best friend he has been there for me a lot.. ^_^ this poem is just me thinking i guess...AS USUAL haha.

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On November 16th 2008 XXFictitiousXX Said: 
XXFictitiousXX nothin wrong with thinkin out loud... evaporating yet at the same time rising... interesting concept... THANX:)
On August 3rd 2008 gabbes Said: 
gabbes hmmm. I wonder who your friend was. Mysterious Mr No Name... how romantic
On July 29th 2008 CassieZ Said: 
CassieZ Very well written, great word choice and descriptions
On July 19th 2008 Dirty00Dizzle Said: 
Dirty00Dizzle OOOO your soo sweet!!!!!
On June 2nd 2008 lisaljb Said: 
lisaljb I like how you think! :)
On May 28th 2008 lildevil357 Said: 
lildevil357 This is a good poem, I like it. ;)
On May 20th 2008 GangstaSam89 Said: 
GangstaSam89 I liked this poem, it was awsome.
On May 2nd 2008 Foreverlyn Said: 
Foreverlyn Deep.
On August 22nd 2007 emily28793 Said: 
emily28793 awsum as poem
On July 20th 2007 Ericnessxo Said: 
Ericnessxo Hey, Awesome Poemms keep up the good work Buddie♥ Woot. Feel free to Look at some of mine. Ericnessxo =)
On June 23rd 2007 darkmatters Said: 
darkmatters wicked
On June 10th 2007 hayahayate Said: 
hayahayate I love it1
On June 7th 2007 withoutacause4 Said: 
my picture
well if thats jus you thinking i wish i thought like that
On June 5th 2007 Jush Said: 
Jush i really enjoyed reading this poem. =D
On June 5th 2007 charissa14 Said: 
charissa14 as usaul...lol...this is really great. i got confused at first but when i read it again it was easier to comprehend. lol
On June 2nd 2007 SoulRevival18 Said: 
SoulRevival18 nice work! really sweet piece!
On May 25th 2007 bigdickfrank Said: 
bigdickfrank that was a really nice poem i liked it
On May 24th 2007 Univarsity Said: 
Univarsity I like this poem. It is very similar to my "Love Hurts" Poem. Very profound in language and expression. Keep up the good work.
On May 24th 2007 CLP64 Said: 
CLP64 very nice =)
On May 23rd 2007 emilythepimp07 Said: 
emilythepimp07 nice poem!
On May 23rd 2007 CSanders18 Said: 
CSanders18 very good poem
On May 22nd 2007 punkparty Said: 
punkparty awesome. poetry is a good way to express yourself
On May 22nd 2007 Darkrisky Said: 
Darkrisky sorry it took so long for me to actually check it out. i've been busy. it was an amazing poem! great job! ^.^
On May 22nd 2007 CCOOLLEE Said: 
CCOOLLEE I really like it! :)
On May 21st 2007 xoFrUiTlOoPxo Said: 
xoFrUiTlOoPxo ah'mazing simly ah'mazing.. truely it is. i just posted a new poem called "College Bound" if you like it comment and vote for it. thanks! u got a gift!!!