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Created:
08/04 2007
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601
Category:
Passion
My Poems
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Words Before Sleep
Goodnight loving family
Goodnight silent stars
Goodnight stubborn misery
Goodnight distant scars
Sleep well maddening thoughts of strife
Sleep tight slipping dreams
See you later bloody knife
Farewell splitting seams
Don't forget me burning hate
Keep me safe my love
Calm, evil I agitate
Guide me Lord above
Please Login to post comments| On December 4th 2008 crazkoala Said: |
| beautiful mind
:) |
| On February 8th 2008 teeniegirl015 Said: |
| I love your ideas. |
| On December 17th 2007 ohmybob Said: |
| nie i liove the rythme |
| On November 19th 2007 mydragonlord Said: |
| I am not a christian and the more i read your work i can see how deep your faith runs, your work is wonderfull. |
| On August 11th 2007 shelbydabrat Said: |
| awesome flow, I love it, keep me posted |
| On August 10th 2007 loradoman Said: |
| I like the balance to this one. The transition back and forth between good and evil is seamless. Nicely done. |
| On August 9th 2007 stics917 Said: |
| good flow to this and you're really good at letting the reader feel your emotions through your choice of words. :] |
| On August 5th 2007 corinne004 Said: |
| Vivid emotions. Your words bring the reader into sync with the speakers, your, feelings. It's very nice. |
| On August 5th 2007 chloejustin22 Said: |
| LOOOOVE IT |
| On August 4th 2007 MeishkaMooshka Said: |
| This flowed nicely. Good job. =) |
| On August 4th 2007 perdylilpyro Said: |
| this is calming and thought provoking and overall simply a really great poem. I appreciate you sharing it |
| On August 4th 2007 coltaw Said: |
| thanks for all of your comments and rates. Every other line rhymes, I like to do that sometimes. |
| On August 4th 2007 akrovaz Said: |
| that's so cool how it didn't exactly rhyme, yet there was rhythm. I wish I could write like that. You are a role model for me! lol.
Great Work! |
| On August 4th 2007 blah2blah Said: |
| I find it best to write before sleeping because your mind is either really calm or everything is on your mind. I really enjoyed reading this, it had a great flow and i like your word choice! |
| On August 4th 2007 Hollehmariee Said: |
| this is really nice, has a great ryhthm. |
| On August 4th 2007 MoOnZoMbIe Said: |
| this is wonderful..it's different from whats mostly on here...and i adore the fact that not everything rhymed. |
