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Created: 09/25 2007
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Category: Lyric

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Dense
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Escape
+ 10
Hate the Fakes
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Horizon
+ 11
This Bridge
+ 21
This Ride
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Godly Thoughts
+ 10
I'll understand why.
+ 18
An Urging Prayer in Poetry
+ 29
The Mind of an Abuser
+ 59
Momma, why...me?
+ 41
EXPLODE
+ 44
Spider WWW.eb
+ 9
Recieve Me
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Before You Take That Leap

Dense (Mixtape)

  • I like sex
  • Drugs rock n’ roll
  • To loose control
  • The fold for fold
  • To indulge the lost soul
  •  
  • What ever happened to the consequences
  • Seems to be too many fences
  • I don’t give a fuck
  •  
  • I cut the breaks
  • Without pretenses
  • Defenses
  • This rush engulfing all the senses
  • Your offensive convalesces
  • Offending only the dense
  •  
  • Is this your way of life
  • Or do you just lack the common sense
  • To see that you’re a little minnow in this sea so immense
  •  
  • But it’s you
  • Do you see who
  • That you do
  • Step up to
  • But you still choose
  • Even though the odds are way the fuck against you
  •  
  • You took the time
  • To speak your mind
  • But now you’re at a loss
  • Be at some time you crossed the line
  • And now you’re huffing my exhaust
  •  
  • And you’ve been tossed with the rest
  • I’m the best
  • Here’s the test
  • Took your shots without the vest
  • Refreshed
  • Now feeling blessed
  •  
  • I’m here standing demanding the coals you’re burning my hand in
  • Ah – Oh Ah
  • It’s got me feeling so outstanding
  •  
  • I’m a rid’a
  • Blinded by the light that burns inside the
  • Feeling of revealing that I’m better than you lya
  •  
  • You ain’t got no money
  • You write like you get it
  • I’m here sav’n my pennies
  • I’ll be the first to admit it
  •  
  • I’ve dug the dirt
  • Slung the work
  • And got skill
  • Not to mention
  • The tension
  • Of being licensed to kill
  •  
  • But I’m real
  • Not just lacing words together cause they sound strill
  • You lack the talent to go big as a bomb deal
  •  
  • Your words as such
  • Will rust
  • No one can trust
  • You as a hypocrite
  • I’ll leave you walk’n home with a crutch
  •  
  • Now you’re hugging your momma
  • Wishing you didn’t jump in
  • Thinking you should have first had been taught how to swim
  •  
  • I don’t
  • Lack the ability
  • To keep the people feeling me
  • I grant you all immunity
  • To free up the community
  • Of noise ‘n
  •  
  • I’m sick of all the fakers spreading poison
  • Boys and their toys
  • True funk as fake McCoys
  •  
  • And I’m topp’n it
  • Leav’n your head nodd’n when you’re rock’n it
  • Thought that you would hate it
  • But in fact it’s quite the opposite
  •  
  • I might be white
  • But I’m repp’n what I got
  • From the looks of me
  • You’d never think I’d bring it this hot
  •  
  • The ball’s in my court now
  • The hoop fell down
  • Leaving every battle to be fought on the ground
  •  
  • My words pound’n
  • The sound in your ears is astound’n
  • Freeborn with def lyrics
  • And no band to be found
  •  
  • in sight
  • But the right
  • To fight the night might
  • Leave my veins pump’n ‘til I get my name in the light
  •  
  • I’m com’n hardcore
  • Transcend your discourse
  • With a raw source
  • Pump like an IV
  • Straight
  • Make you cry more
  •  
  • I’ll be your overdose
  • The rush will leave you comatose
  • Wake to see me surf’n down the hall way
  • On a gurney yo
  •  
  • I’ll be rumble in your jugular
  • Rubb’n til your voice goes horse
  • From the force of what I’m bringing ya
  •  
  • I’ll bring the chemical burn
  • That kind that you’ll never learn to discern
  • Because my heat is all earned
  •  
  • An in enlightenment
  • I’ll write the script
  • That leaves you in a race to light a cigarette
  • But accidentally light the wick
  •  
  • And I’m igniting it
  • The tighter grip
  • The pen and pad
  • That notarize
  • The scribble blend to dribble
  • And get higher kid
  •  
  • You won’t know that it’s me
  • Right when you hear it
  • When you see that my name’s on the tract
  • You gonna fear it
  •  
  • And it’s incredible and legible
  • The tension will have you clenching your mandible
  • Trying to manage the intangible
  •  
  • An animal of sorts
  • Cohoasred to high spirits
  • The leery to cheery DeMi
  • Now hear me and all my lyrics
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On October 20th 2007 babyblue187954 Said: 
babyblue187954 you were right. not dissapointed one bit.. it was great.. Youve got real talent
On October 9th 2007 7unicornrings Said: 
7unicornrings i LOVE it!!! amazing work!
On October 8th 2007 tswieberg Said: 
tswieberg This is really good.
On October 8th 2007 California1516 Said: 
California1516 oh wow..nice job!! i got sucked into it! :D
On October 8th 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said: 
EvilRaven9892 Nice James, I like it alot.
On October 8th 2007 101091 Said: 
101091 I really like. It's a little long but it's still good. Great job.
On October 8th 2007 dark013angel Said: 
dark013angel not bad, not bad...i like it, though you seem to lose the flow at some parts...and with it's length, a person reading it could lose concentration throughout it, and not really understand what's being said in the piece...i like it though +1
On October 8th 2007 necrosiss Said: 
necrosiss this is great! you have a great way with words.
On October 6th 2007 DeathMetalPunk Said: 
DeathMetalPunk woa this is SUPER AWESOME. But i though you were all christian and stuff?
On September 26th 2007 monkeydee22 Said: 
monkeydee22 Good I like it. ~Vampyr~
On September 26th 2007 amanda710faith Said: 
amanda710faith cool. nice writing. you're my favorite =]
On September 25th 2007 amptone Said: 
amptone Very good, got angst I do..