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Created:
04/22 2007
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Before You Take That Leap |
Spider WWW.eb
- This strange reality leaves me here to question who I really am, as I impose my thoughts on to a web of empty faces.
- Spiders expose themselves from the darkness, inspecting the mental meal left for them to devour.
- Many lose interest, unwilling to dissect this hearty offering; still others remain engaged and begin their journey closer.
- These capsules of information provide new knowledge into my existence and the curious research the extent of my being.
- As they ingest my essence I become a part of them, demanding their attention as our excretions expect more from one another.
- Ensnared in this give and take relationship, we acquire new methods of survival, adapting them to our own lives as we see fit.
Please Login to post comments| On July 9th 2007 angelalone Said: |
| i like how you used the colors to spell out the other message/s.pretty interesting.thumbs up. |
| On July 5th 2007 PoeticPang Said: |
| woah,,,, nice structure,, i like ur use of the diff colors dropped in here and there,, if i can make out what the colors say,, lol,, ::: BLUE "a spider is what you are." GREEN "and i'm nothing but a host."........ lol,,, woah,, owow,,, awsomeness,, dang,,, makes me so craxy,, lol,, loopy messages mixed in,, that's ,, hahahaaa,, psychadellic,, ... 'mazing poem,, tho i prefer the hidden message inside it better,,, ^___^~~~~~~Pang |
| On April 27th 2007 Purp7eFi7th Said: |
| i love this : )
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| On April 23rd 2007 joguff1977 Said: |
| Wow this one is good. |
| On April 23rd 2007 KathLoOnie Said: |
| holy crap. .... holy.. crap. That's .. awsome.. that made me tingle. I'm sorry I missed it. I'm such a fool. Fuckin great.. |
| On April 23rd 2007 crotchrotwedgy Said: |
| To curve any curiousity. The blue and green letters say something. Blue first then green. It's kind of the key to the metaphor of the poem. |
| On April 23rd 2007 KathLoOnie Said: |
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| I love it, don't really understand what's withthe letter highlighting. |
| On April 22nd 2007 chickenbroth Said: |
| this is crazy and sureal, you do great work!!!!!!!!! |
| On April 22nd 2007 lyssabean72792 Said: |
| cool poem..very deep and meaningful. |
| On April 22nd 2007 sunny102 Said: |
| Love it...:) |
| On April 22nd 2007 marlana79 Said: |
| I love it! |
| On April 22nd 2007 tswieberg Said: |
| Wow, definately interesting way to put it....nice |
| On April 22nd 2007 lestatinator Said: |
| OOOOOO, ITS FUCKING ROCKIN ASSSSSSS!!! I LUV HOW YOU WORDEDEDEDEDED IT!!!! AND THE GREEN BLUE THING, FREAKIN SCHWEET IDEAS!!!! laterz homie |
| On April 22nd 2007 jewells716 Said: |
| oh i like it i like it i like it! i is a spider! woot! makes me smile :) it's really good despite my silliness this morning sorry about that. it is awesome. YOU ROCK! |
| On April 22nd 2007 sarh92 Said: |
| That was a really kool poem it has alot of meaning in it ^_^ |
| On April 22nd 2007 imbored9909 Said: |
| i like this one, its good |
