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I'm Sick and Tired of Taking Your Advice

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Dear Satan

Views (340) Lyric Created on 7-13-07 Flag
  • Dear Satan
  •  
  • (Verse 1)
  •  
  • Dear Satan,
  • I really need you to hear me
  • I know you’ve been given power
  • And have no reason to fear me
  •  
  • You have a way with words
  • That makes them easy to believe
  • But every time I listen
  • I can’t help but to feel deceived
  •  
  • When I’m alone you talk to me
  • Tell me that the world is out to get me
  • And you want to see me punish them
  • Put them in their place
  • And never run from them
  •  
  • You want to see me start a fight
  • Because you know that tonight
  • It’s just the thing
  • That will ruin my life
  • I’m sick an tired of taking your advice
  •  
  • (Chorus)
  •  
  • I’ve been
  • Branded and stranded
  • By your
  • Vindictive falsities
  • And
  • I hate the cold pain of
  • Deranged anxiety
  •  
  • I don’t know what to do
  • To make you go away
  • When I’m alone
  • I’ll bend my knees
  • And fervently I’ll pray
  •  
  • “Lord Jesus, help me for I don’t know which path is right.
  • Satan doesn’t want to see me make it to the light.
  • He has a hold on me and his grip is so tight.
  • I need your holy armor if I’m to stand up in this fight.”
  •  
  • (Verse 2)
  •  
  • I hope that that’s enough
  • I never want to live another day
  • That I have to say
  • “I’m sorry for the way that I treated you.”
  •  
  • Satan, I hate you
  • For the things you do
  • We were friends for a while
  • But I’m finally starting to see the truth
  •  
  • You took the fact
  • That I’m impatient and opinionated
  • Turned it into reasons
  • To fear, and feel hatred
  •  
  • I’ll stand outside
  • Watching myself explode
  • Screaming cause I can’t
  • Jettison my cargo
  •  
  • The pressure
  • The pain
  • The heart left as cold as ice
  • I’m sick and tired of taking your advice
  •  
  • (Chorus)
  •  
  • I’ve been
  • Branded and stranded
  • By your
  • Vindictive falsities
  • And
  • I hate the cold pain of
  • Deranged anxiety
  •  
  • I don’t know what to do
  • To make you go away
  • When I’m alone
  • I’ll bend my knees
  • And fervently I’ll pray
  •  
  • “Lord Jesus, help me for I don’t know which path is right.
  • Satan doesn’t want to see me make it to the light.
  • He has a hold on me and his grip is so tight.
  • I need your holy armor if I’m to stand up in this fight.”
  •  
  • (Verse 3)
  •  
  • If I keep listening
  • I know you’ll be the death of me
  • Seed my mind with evil thoughts
  • That bleed out the last breath from me
  •  
  • This life’s a test for me
  • And you’re writing trick questions
  • To which the answers
  • Are multiples of tragic life lessons
  •  
  • Even if I got it right
  • You’ll probably find an error
  • In the way I applied the formula
  • You don’t care
  •  
  • You don’t want to see me pass the test
  • You want to see me fail
  • Fall from God’s grace
  • Deep into the flames of hell
  •  
  • I’ve been given free will
  • And for what I’ve done
  • I’ll have to pay a price
  • But for now
  • I’m sick and tired of taking your advice
  •  
  • (Chorus)
  •  
  • I’ve been
  • Branded and stranded
  • By your
  • Vindictive falsities
  • And
  • I hate the cold pain of
  • Deranged anxiety
  •  
  • I don’t know what to do
  • To make you go away
  • When I’m alone
  • I’ll bend my knees
  • And fervently I’ll pray
  •  
  • “Lord Jesus, help me for I don’t know which path is right.
  • Satan doesn’t want to see me make it to the light.
  • He has a hold on me and his grip is so tight.
  • I need your holy armor if I’m to stand up in this fight.”
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On December 8th 2007 Tigga16 Said :
Tigga16 OMG this is like one of my favorites by you! I can't believe you don't have more points for it but I'm definately going to give you a vote! I LOVE IT
On October 18th 2007 ZinArmagadan Said :
ZinArmagadan This is awesome. Did you actually get any time to put this to some music and perform it? If you have or ever will, I'd love to hear it. It has really awesome meaning, and it's brilliantly written out. If you haven't already made it into a song, tell me when you do and give me a way to listen to it. Take care and the best of wishes!! ~Cheers
On October 10th 2007 monkeydee22 Said :
monkeydee22 This is amazing... i'm pretty much speechless. It sounds like you really mean it so it makes the song stand out more. ~Vampyr~
On October 9th 2007 7unicornrings Said :
7unicornrings wow! i deffinately HAVE to go listen to this now!! =D it was the greatest freakin thing ive ever read!! seriously. ive never read anything so amazing about satans hold! this as really good! its very inspirational and i just absolutely LOVE it!!!
On October 9th 2007 robespierre96 Said :
robespierre96 awesome way to stand!!!!
On October 9th 2007 megan2234 Said :
megan2234 i liked it it was hell kool
On October 8th 2007 tswieberg Said :
tswieberg Oh wow, this is an amazing song. I love it.
On October 8th 2007 California1516 Said :
California1516 HOLY CRAPOLA!!!!!!!!! this was FANTASTIC!!!!!!! :O dang..excellent writting skillz!!
On October 8th 2007 101091 Said :
101091 I love it. It's so so good. It really hits home for me right now and is just what I needed to read today. Thanks. Great job.
On October 8th 2007 kgrf101 Said :
kgrf101 Very nice!
On October 8th 2007 amanda710faith Said :
amanda710faith you inspire me. thats all that needs to be said
On October 8th 2007 Teresia07 Said :
Teresia07 I LOVE IT :)
On October 8th 2007 Teresia07 Said :
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On October 8th 2007 Teresia07 Said :
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On October 8th 2007 necrosiss Said :
necrosiss I'm speechless, and definitely not disappointed. This is really amazing, and for it to be turned into a song would be spectacular. You have an amazing way with words, I wish I had your skill, keep it up!
On August 3rd 2007 babyblue187954 Said :
babyblue187954 I really liked this one.. not many songs that Ive heard talked about how they in a way connected with Santan.. I mean not that It with a connection but that youve had experiences with him that you admitt not everyone wants to admitt satan had a hand on their life.. I really needed this .. Thanks
On July 19th 2007 fgggfx Said :
fgggfx wow, im speechless! amazing poem! i love the prayer, i'd love to hear this as a song.
On July 14th 2007 DeathMetalPunk Said :
DeathMetalPunk BEST SONG I HAVE EVER HEARD! awesome man! i know you probably hate metal but you should check out my christian metal lyrics on my profile, "Eternal Oath" and "Fire out of Egypt" thanks!